Machineflesh 3D Challenge Entry: Marco

#58

excellent modelling…
I really like the design, going well.
Look forward to seeing the final render.

#59

Maybe you can take a look at Blade Runner (the movie as well as the video game) for the bar’s atmosphere. The mix between old and new is one of the best I’ve ever seen.
:shrug:

#60

Evilmaul…Looking very good.Nice modeling.clean,and smooth.Also fun and interesting…What;s best to me is the idea…it’s interesting in a big way.I like this piece all your work here very much,and the idea is clever,well thought out.Keep coming with updates,I am interested to see this advance to it’s full potential…:buttrock: :beer:

#61

Nice concept! I love this one!

Best of luck to you. I really like the character’s facial expressions. They read really well. Keep the cool images coming!

:beer:

#62

thanx to all ppl, to Virtuoso and swadepgh for the compliments and your interest in my concept.
in these days im busy at work :hmm: so no new update for now…
but ho to post in next days. :slight_smile:

cya
Marco

#63

hi ppl,

back after some time…i was busy at work so there arent important updates, plus last week i breaked my right wrist so its a little difficoult to work :slight_smile:
Before i continue to modelling (environment, props, etc) im thinking about the layout of the final image…tell me what’s better for u.
Any comments/suggestions is welcome :slight_smile:

cya
Marco

#64

…and orizontal one.

#65

…or something like that?

#66

ladies and gentleman,our machineflesh winner is EVILMAUL!!!

we must all quit right now :smiley:

#67

Hi Evilmaul,

this thread is catapulted in my own personal top list of this contest to one of the first places just now…:bowdown:

Great.Awesome.Amazing.

Keep up this fantastic work!!!:applause: :beer:

#68

Superb modeling and really beautiful style…i am looking forward for your final composition.:beer:

#69

Love your entry. I’m positive you should go with one of the first 2, but maybe think about bringing the camera up to eye level with your “Jack Nicholson” character. At the moment it feels like the viewer is cowering behind the bar and peeking up at the characters… or a fly on the bar…

I think at least this way you will have the feeling of “being there”… just an opinion, feel free to disregard :wink:

#70

still havent decided about final layout. Personally i like more a vertical layout…but it will be changed in the end. For now i started to model the environment… About the style it will be something like Libery style.

thx to all for positive comments :slight_smile:

Marco

#71

the chandelier: the shaders, textures are not finals.

Marco

#72

I like the third layout, but I’m with Pleribus; It would be nice to see our bar from the eyes of a costumer…
Even being more radical, by modeling the one “we are” so that you can see your own arm, your shadows and reflections in the other objects in the scene… :buttrock:

This entry is absolutely great! Amazing modeling skills

#73

Awesome modeling man!
Really like your concept!
Looking forward for your piece of art.

#74

Evilmaul…Just wanted to stop by again and tell you I think you are doing a great job…Looking very good from all points…Just keep it rolling,you have yourself a wonderful entry to be proud of…:thumbsup: :beer:

#75

Nice concept and 3d work but this has already been made. :hmm:
Your image image reminds me a lot (maybe too much) the following illustration from Oscar Chichoni

#76

wow SILMAETH That’s a very nice illustration…i like it very much…but if u have read my thread from the first post u’ll know that im workin to have a look as in Shining scene like exactly this…obviusly with my characters!

take a look:

cya
Marco

#77

I also think that the look (atmosphere) will be more interesting as in Shining. But for what you already made I think it remains closer to the Oscar’s illustration in many points:
-the biomecha stuffs
-the bald guy
-the very long board
-the layout

I don’t want to blame you for plagiarism but more for some kind of hard-pronounced inspiration coz I hardly believe that you never saw this illustration before you begun modelling.

Anyway, maybe Oscar Chichoni took the same source of inspiration as you did, but for me, it’s obvious that your work refers more directly to his illustration than the film.