I agree with continuumx. The focus should be the bike. So, you can see all the fine details. So try not to give the bike motionblur which would hide the details.
And… The new concept looks terribly like a certain game… even the markings on the road are similar.
I would like to see more detail on the bike and a more refined textures. Focus your attention to the bike, it still needs lots of work. But, you are getting there.
Dennis
The race is very drastic. I think the engin must be more near the camera, to see détails of your engin.
Nice work.
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Hiya Genesisa,
I have been watching the progress of ur work. Firstly I would like to say I like the Bike idea, I wonder why u would change at such a late date.
Secondly…I have read some of the comments people have made, They r just comments. When people comment on my work I respect constructive criticism… I do artwork because i like doing it. Art for art sake. If u like doing it and u r good at it, go with it.
Don’t dilute the forums with irrelevant and unnecessary fluff. CGTalk is a professional, moderated forum. It’s a place to talk about all things related to computer graphics. It’s NOT a free speech forum.
I believe ur idea is Machine introduced to flesh… The focus i feel should be on the person because the bike is the attached element. But hey thats just my opinion 
ok this is it i dont shure if you gonna understand this becus im not very good in english.
This one is a future, where the constant threats on behalf of us towards the nature and our zeal for trying to protect them it(he,she) did that the same one was taking the control of the situation, seemingly the methods of air purification and protection systems against monoxide of carbon and other pollutants developed to the plants(floors) of an abnormal form, now they grow up to 20 times more big of the normal thing, produce major oxygen as collateral effect he(she) benefits us largely, we have managed to adapt our body to it. The buildings monuments that we were possessing as recollections, lost importance stayed in the oblivion, totally destroyed by the roots of these giants who finish with everything what we had in the past.
The only(unique) solution was to create a way of life that was allowing us to adapt us to these new forms of great size and to take advantage of them to begin again with our lives, you see one in our recollections it(he,she) brings over of mythological statements, in some epoch of the past we manage to believe in the existence of small beings that live in the wood kingdom, and wings were using as way of transport, contributing beauty and generating a mystical environment that was illuminating the place, now we are the small ones and the only that us towards lack were the wings to sail along the above mentioned environment.
Surviving engineers to the catastrophe that is now our source(fountain) of resources and home(fireplace), realized different investigations(researches) and tests(proofs) that helped to the creation of these complex mechanical, extremely light(slight), but very resistant wings and of great functionality we learned to place them of efficient and permanent form in our body, time later our own(proper) industrial and mechanical growth I believe some kind of important and complex mas that the nano-technology already hour could embed the wings of one you see before that the person saw for the first time in his(her,your) life.
Now the human beings in you see of admiring such a beauty that these ancient statements were contributing, we are a part(report) of they, feel with luck of which the disaster happened so(then,since) now we have apart from abundant oxygen, sources(fountains) of natural resources almost impossible to finish apart from all that already it(he,she) manipulates neither the greed nor the materialism, we live in the giants and with giant it we are. We grow constant as persons, feel with luck, this one even is our planet.
this is the like a city in the trees
is gonna be the envrioment if anyone want to see the story is in my threat bye and good luck for everyone.
this is the final model of the fayrie but if anyone have a critic please teall me.
thanks everybody and good luck
definently a direction i was planning on going, but with time constraints I probably won’t make it.
this is looking really nice, as far as the character. I like all of the compositional shots you do, but I think we need to see her more, upclose, for the final image.
Then again, it looks decent the way it is. 
