Machineflesh 3D Challenge Entry: Adrian Lozano

#21

Great job; the idea is amazing! :bounce:

About the model, something’s strange with the pants… In the legs, the proportions in Z are bigger than proportions in X (pa que me entiendas; se ve más largo que ancho):surprised
Sigue adelante! :thumbsup:

#22

Puede ser la cámara como fué rendeada. Tal vez si muestras la posición canónica se aprecie mejor

#23

Thanks for the comments and the crits guys , this is the face of Archivald and a new shot to see the proportions of the body.

Any comments and crits are welcome

#24

And we have flesh…Good to see.The Funborns are here…:thumbsup:

            If I could make a suggestion adr..............:lightbulb 


           I would elongate the upper torso a touch.The chest area should be a little longer in the "Y" direction,just a touch.

           I would probably add one more fat roll below the two along the rib cage.................

            I think the arms need more length,and the hands need more size overall.....................

           These are small things,and most probably taste issues on my part,just trying to give you another set of eys here adr.......

           All in all it's looking good,and the concept theme has lots of potential in all aspects.........OK get back to work,I'll check back up on you later.Nice WIP thus far.Keep at it hard........:thumbsup: :beer:
#25

Hi Adr: as a complement with the virtuoso’s advice, i think that the line between the neck and chest is so marked, makes look the head totally apart from the body, is just matter of moving those vertices out a bit to lose contrast in that line, but this could be just a personal taste matter so maybe is not necesary to do this, this model is going good, the character looks really funny, nice job man!:thumbsup:

#26

Good job ADR. Try to smoth a little the chest. The head looks great :beer: I’ts very funny

#27

Perdona que insista,

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Creo que debería ser redonda :stuck_out_tongue:

#28

Virtuoso , Rattlesnake thks for your kinds words guys, ill work in your suggestions today and tweak the body the the arms and the head.

Verynasty thanks man for your opinions, ill work later in the chest to improve it

Mosconariz didnt forgot your point about the legs man , ill work in that too

Thanks guys :slight_smile:

#29

Cool clown, and my mum thinks Im one..... yours confims what Ive suspected all along, Im not really. Your models looking real cool.:thumbsup:

#30

This is a different point on the challenge subject that i haven’t seen so far…nice thought adr !!!..i don’t know if it helps but if u could find BINGO the small movie that was with Maya 1 made …u will find a lot of good color reference…(and some modeling ideas ) to give your subject more that circus mood.

If u don’t know where to find it …tell me to find a link for u !!!

:bounce: …now get to work :wip:

cheers

#31

Yeah, Bingo rules!, great reference!

#32

Thanks for the comments dimitri , btw i found the bingos video and can be helpful to define the composition . thanks for the tip .

Now im almost ready to update !!!:slight_smile: :beer:

#33

In this update i worked in the head givin more details , adding the hair and the first wires to archivalds head

Any comments and crits are welcome
thanks

#34

Wireframe

#35

It’s getting better and better!

Buen peluquín, se parece a Brozo :wip:

#36

Que tal ADR…:wavey:

Esta padre tu modelo del payaso, lo que ellos no saben, es

que no se trata de bingo, mas bien es una version corregida

y aumentada de BROZO, mitad humano y mitad maquina… :buttrock:

Suerte y un saludo…:thumbsup:

See my machineflesh challenge 3D

#37

For no-mexican readers; here is Brozo: :wip:

#38

in fact i was looking in the net and found a lot of images with that kind of hair and i decide to put it in my model

Thanks for your comments :beer:

#39

I like your concept man and your model is unique.
I think about his hair if it like the photo that mosconariz posted
it may be has somthing more interesting<up to U>.However good job and want to see more,Good luck

:applause:

#40

Thanks for your comments porla113 . Ill update in the night

and keep an eye in your project :slight_smile: