Machineflesh 2D Challenge Entry: von caberte


#21

Hey I really like this design!

I feel its got a very dramatic feel to it due to the composition. In this design its much more evident as to what its design purpose is.

I’m lookin forward to your further work and I would recommend this design idea for your final image, but thats just my opinion.


#22

ok. now the legs are starting to make sense… great.

.b


#23

amazing:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

Love everything about it… specially the angle!!!

Cheerz:beer:

Tommy Lee


#24

this dog tried to act like a donkey? it kinda give me a sense of dat. maybe its sleepy eyes? Or the huge ears?? I am confused. Actually i hate dogs so much. haha…

One day, i was walking on the street, & stopped by for my friend. I felt something stepped on my shoes. I looked down . It’s a dog put its foot on my shoes!.. Haha, everybody can imagine how dirty my shoes is…

heyman,Guard Dog V2 will be a masterpiece!. i like dat one!


#25

Very well rendered ! I hope to never meet such dogs :slight_smile:


#26

Hi!!!

It’s quite along time that i haven’t post an update of my entry. Been out of the radar lately. :)))

I seen two “Dog” related concept that thrown in. :frowning:
So, i decided to create another concept, i come up with an organic creature and named it “SAPAT”.

Again, i like to hear everybody’s comment.

cabertevon
http://www.cabertevon.com


#27

Here’s my follow up sketch of my entry. I placed a bit tighter outline on the spinal and on the rib cage.

I’m planning to put my creature a “Root” like skin/texture… We’ll see what will happen next.:)))


#28

congrats with your very nice rendered drawings, just the way I like them: sketchy but straight ahead and lots of detail…reminds me of other great artists I know…
I like your concept as well, altough I find you should think about the functionalities a little bit more. who am I to judge you?
looking forward to see some coloured drawings…

good luck


#29

Okey… Here is my test sketch for my “skin/Texture”…giving the Rib and Spinal a detail.

Hope to hear a C&C from everybody.


#30

oh u have a new concept , this one is really cool , i like the muscle and flesh details , this lineart is starting well !


#31

oh yes !

again a killer in 2d !
it’s great ! :thumbsup:


#32

hum hum… well …heuuuu
argh i m dying !!:cry: if i m a killer, you re my lord !!!
keep the sketchs coming !!! :beer:
they rule !!! (got any tut to do such sketch ??? )


#33

Second Phase of my line art:

Time to show my creature’s limb… I created a human like upper leg and laying a same skin/texture, so that it will jive with the upper body.

I’m pinning my idea of the lower leg, an ostrich leg and a monkey feet with a toe/claw of a cat. The detailed drawing of which is next.

Thanks…


#34

very nice rendering:thumbsup:


#35

Oh I liked your dog… Well that’s your choice. I think personnally that there is a problem between the realistic musclesand machinery, and the cartoony face, It’s kind of disturbing for me…


#36

Good work! I like the second idea better, and nice rendering the muscle part! I love that a lot!! (however, I think you have the ability to create something more impressive than that! DEFINITELY!!) Well, I guess u and me are both in the middle of the development… :stuck_out_tongue: Therefore, I am also gonna say it to myself as well, “I can do better!!” Haha!! And I will be glad that u can give me some words as well! Once again, good job!! :beer:


#37

i really like the skin texture… great rendering man~~~… so it is another guard creature?

SAPAT!!! climbing on tree branches?


#38

Bonestudio - Thank you for your honest opinion… I have same feeling of the head as well…Surely i’m gonna change the head. :wink:

Masahiro - …"I guess u and me are both in the middle of the development… Therefore, I am also gonna say it to myself as well, “I can do better!!”…

        "I can do better!!"...and we share the same prayer.

To Viag,Xia,Nov@ and Moa[f2d] thank you also and Godspeed.

von

:beer:


#39

Hi cabertevon,
Wow your concept is really cool. I like the details you have given
to your character. You are really a talented artist.
I am waiting for your next great update.
keep the good work going:thumbsup:


#40

Third Phase of my line art:

Detail sketch of the lower leg.:)))

Thanks.