Machineflesh 2D Challenge Entry: Thierry Bonnet

#81

Interesting concept :slight_smile: :smiley:

(hilarious logo and “just stop it” sign)

:beer:

#82

stick with the basket concept: its nice.
But another compo perhaps?
it doesnt really “tell the story” of the concept…

#83

Your work is always amazing me Bone. really nice WIP, I love the concept and the pub like concept is excellent :applause:

#84

great job man!

#85

yeah man u got a really cool concept as everyone mentioned bfr. i’m not gonna write about the concept but i could say that shoulder armor is a bit too big… if it was baseball then it would hellp him to protect himself from the ball which would be faster than a speedin bullet. :slight_smile: but think about his moves in basketball… when he raises his arm the shoulder will hit his head…also he won’t see the circle while doin a slam. but indeed concept is cooler than the most.:thumbsup:

#86

Until now ALL your work is great!

keep the basketball idea! :applause:

#87

What happened to the forum ? all my previous post are gone ?

Do I have to repuload all ?

Here is my last version

Any comment is appreciated

#88

actually its paintin is cool and shoulder armor now looks better. his waist looks weak due to his upper body… actually iwhat i mean by waist is not his abdominals… his sides of abs. those muscles seems like weak due to his abs. but he seems like a half steel-structured man so he might have thinner waist to have a better look. the steel tube inside his right chest muscle is not givin me the feelin that it has got a dimention. looks like a drawin on his chest… the tubes on his neck has a better dimension .anyway its not that important. but i wonder would those tubes r nececary on his biceps? actually he has got enough tubes at his arms. but indeed it looks good. and one more thing to his short. could it be diffrent than old fashioned short? it looks good, but i’m just questioning for a better result may come as an idea…ofcourse some good idea’s wont look good in a drawin. so keep what looks good ;):cool:

#89

Hey that is a cool idea!
Keep this way!:slight_smile:

#90

There’s some amazing rendering throughout your thread.

And the final image certainly has impact. I do kinda miss some of the dynamism of the earlier posts, though…

The advert idea is great… maybe you could have some smaller action shots tied into the poster…? It probably doesn’t need them but i just miss those moving figures… :slight_smile:

#91

Well I changed his pants, I like the tubes in his body, so I think I’ll keep them.

For the lack of action, I have to say that it’s not a contest about action but about merging machin and flesh, that’s why I didn’t keep action movement in the last piece.

Here is more advanced version

#92

well yeah now its lookin good with that short :wink:
,it would be to much work to put some action behind but u could put the other guys silhouette’s or some man silhouhette’s standin behind him and fadin to background kinda… if u r planin to fill up the background… or u can keep it like this.
good work.:thumbsup:

#93

Well I think I"m close to the end.

I tried to put some action behind but I think it’s too disturbing and I won’t keep it for the final one.

I added an element on his torso, it’s a “turbo” button, the player press it and his skills are much stronger for a short time, for a dunk for example.

#94

I realy like it.
it looks finished to me :slight_smile:
great design on the metal parts and i like the way you linked the metal and the flesh parts.
definitely one of my favs so far :slight_smile:

#95

Great ideas, Im lovin’ it! I miss the arena but I like the latest idea the best. he character loks sahweet. I think the piece would look cool with the 2 additional guys in the two sides as long as it was kept light blue blended into the back sorta like they are now, it would jsut be cool as an indication that there are various types of enhancements for different players.

I really like the armor on the one side on the main character!

-JH

#96

I think this is the final piece, I will take some days to do something else, to come back on it with a new fresh look, to see if there are things to change.

#97

Impressive !!

but…he seems leaning to the right…maybe you have to re-center his body…Or it’s me ? Maybe i’m leaning… huh…

Bah…anyway…it’s a good work and a good idea man !:thumbsup:

#98

hi my friend!
very good work but i think u must lighter the scene the darkness have taken away some good details u’ve worked

c dommage mon ami que tu cache tes atouts
keep going:thumbsup:

#99

I would go on with the lighter version too.

some texture on the basketball would be nice too, so it’s more obvious to the viewer…

Bruno

#100

hi bone…this is a great wip. i love the characters you’ve made. i think that more texture would be nice on the basketball too. it’ll give it the extra kick. great job!