Machineflesh 2D Challenge Entry: Thierry Bonnet

#61

Bonestudio,
Fantastic concept and visualisation. I am very impressed with your skills…very talented. :thumbsup:

Looking forward to seeing more!
Good luck!

#62

Well I had some time the last 2 days to begin the final composition. So here is the result I hope you’ll like it, I have a lot to do now… to finish it

#63

I love your work! full of creativity :smiley:

#64

Yo! The new comp turn out really nice! I dig it!:thumbsup:

#65

:buttrock:

#66

Here is an update with a lot of modifications and color effects

#67

Hey good action going on with those 2 guys aiming to score. :bounce:

This looks quite dark. Maybe its just my monitor, but i would like to see the area little more light up.

Also that background does still stand out to be little more 3Dish than the players. Arena also looks so cramped up for people with super talent and mechanical aids.

I didnt read all the posts, but will there be audience anywhere?

Rest of the players look so passive. Just standing and staring will it be a point. They should be running and jumping to get ready for possible rebound or something :buttrock:

Sorry if i werent supposed to say anything, but otherwise this is great computergame material. This stuff really looks like it could possible replace that speedball game :thumbsup:

#68

Man, you are doing a great work…

#69

Damn! u are getting so much better than last time I saw you at the T-Dome thing. Looking Great!

#70

great concept, if i can suggest somethng try to seperate more the first plane from the background.

#71

nice dynamic feeling and great color !

#72

Hey,

I had a question, are the players machine parts powered by something…maybe like power packs or solar powered? I think making them solar powered and playing outside would be a lot more brutal, eh, eh?

I’m just rambling. Great ideas, good concept. I like. Keep it up!

#73

This is the final composition for this fake advertising. I wasn’t very happy with the background so I choose to hide it a bit.

I need to work on details now…

Tell me what you think

#74

this latest looks pretty cool , though I liked the earlier design
too and I wouldn’t hide it so much … I would also like to see
more clearly the other player designs

great stuff , nonetheless ! :thumbsup:

#75

I really like your stuff and idea, but in my humble opinion…I love the earlier one much more. Agree with Squipbit. You could refine it some more and play around with it a bit more. :thumbsup:

#76

Amazing that you really are thinking of the whole big picture :slight_smile:

Advertisements and all. That new ball is so bright. So is the sport called Solar Ball ??

Could be:hmm:

#77

This is hilarious. You’ve got great perspective going here in the new colored versions. Nice action and concept with the platforms.

Just an idea: but I thought it would be cool if the guy you have jumping off the wall on the right was your concept character with the extendable arms, and he was reaching towards the ball with one of his arms extended to the front of the scene.

Nice work, keep at it,

RPJ

#78

very creative ideas! great!:thumbsup:

#79

thanks for the comment on my thread ! :bounce:
You know , I think for the moment you have the BEST concept! :buttrock:

So add some details , your latest fake advertising is Very funny and cool but I think you shoulf let the basket in flashy yellow to be in accord with the ball! and smooth a little the machanic parts and adding some details would be very cool!!^^

#80

After a break I looked at that final pice and I have to say that I really reall don’t like it at all…

I don’t know if I’ll keep that basketball idea… Maybe I should try another compo…