Hello, Mr. Chang. Very nice pictures both of them. :love:
I would definately choose “fix my broken heart”. Love the mood in that one. The mirror girl pic would be also great but imho it doesn’t have enough “machineflesh” feeling, what ever that means. 
But that is only my opinion.
Keep it up! 
I really think I prefer the image with the father and the girl, the fashion one is an intresting concept, but the other has more heart and more of a personal story to it. The woman in the fashion one could be anyone, but the one with the man and the girl reminds me of the Pinocchio concept, it has more heart and character to it, I feel theres a beautifula nd melancholic story in there somewhere and its a nice compositon too
Synthetic Vanity has my vote! It just grabs my attention more than the other one - I think it’s the pose and the concept that are more appealing.
hi robert. i love both concepts you have. they are interesting in there own ways. seeing how you went with fixing a broken heart. i think that you need to resolve some anatomical issues within the father. his head seems to be sitting unnaturally on his shoulders and you seem to have hid is left hand. it might be the angle but i think that you could find a better solution than hiding most of it. as for the girl. i think it’s good right now except for the left hand. it seems to be suspended in mid-air. how is it doing that? as i look at it more…there is also some tension in the way that the left foot is covered by the wire. i think that showing the whole foot can be more interesting while you move the wire to new location. good luck with the painting.
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hey Luna 
Concept wise I like Fix My Broken Heart too. it shows more machine side of her than Synthetic Vanity with some hint of humanity since brokenheart can also be refer to heart brokening from love :wip: I think you’ll need to answer some question in your image tho for example right now I can’t tell yet if the guy is fixing her heart. From a first glance it looks like he’s tearing the girl apart. Also i think it give us more sympathy if the guy is fixing the girl in a similar way a surgery doctor would do to a patient :hmm: you know, it’s easier for us to connect ourselves to the characters.
I also think you should concentrate your composition more on the characters unless there’s some meaning in the background since it occupies so much space.
I hope I am not screaming about nothing, but WHERE IS THE FINALIZED STUFF??? It really depresses me to see some really great beginning work unfinished and not in the voting section!!!:sad:
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