you have a beautiful fine mark!.. excellent job!![]()
Machineflesh 2D Challenge Entry: Nelson C. Florentino
Bombproof - Could you put a little word for me on your frog sketch, as “For Newke” for example, and put your signature?
Please. :bounce: :bowdown:
very cool style, love how the hatching follows the contours of your figures. very plastic, and a lot like the hatching technique the old masters used to use.
I think you have one of the best concepts up here…you can tell from the replies you’ve been getting that it’s exciting, and invites people to make up stories of their own…based on the grounds that you set.
keep it up, can’t wait to see how this turns out.
Originally posted by Newke
[B]Bombproof - Could you put a little word for me on your frog sketch, as “For Newke” for example, and put your signature?Please. :bounce: :bowdown: [/B]
i’m sending it to your email address.
Hope you like it.
enzo
heres the second pass on the composition. more details on the tummy and on the environment. i based my new bg on existing subway photos. right now i’m doing studies on the fetus. thanks a lot leonardo da vinci.
please bear with me because i tend to do a lot of studies when i’m working on a subject.
enzo
I have to agree. I’m a fan of your crosshatchwork. very successfully executed. As far as the concept… I’m not sure if I’m on the same page with you. I just think its me though, all taboo about it or something. I guess I’m really looking what you’re gonna do as a final and can’t wait to see the whole thing finished. Ohh and I want to have a drink with your frog!

Originally posted by relativity
[B]:buttrock:Awesome concept! I totally love your sketches. Talented ka pare.
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thanks for the support pareng erwin! its a big boost for me getting a nod of approval from you.
Originally posted by crazybread [B]
As far as the concept… I’m not sure if I’m on the same page with you. I just think its me though, all taboo about it or something.
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thanks for liking my hatchwork but, whats in your mind c.b.? 
the final artwork wont be hatched. it will be painted. it’s just that hatching the details in the image makes me more aware of what and where they are in scene. it’s always good that you understand whats going on inside the scene.
the problem is i get hooked on hatching that by the time i start painting it i start missing my pens.
…Iguess I’m personally not feeling it when I look inside the woomb of a carying mother. I like your idea about her being pregnant, and nursing or carying embryos or eggs inside but having her display the woumb like a diorama is personally wierd to me. PLease don’t take it personally I’m just thinking outloud here. Perhaps when its done in photoshop and there will be some sort of glass on the belly when one can see whats happening inside. I love the concept but all I guess I was trying to say is that she looks hurt (although her face expression doesn’t convey that) I guess that does not compute in my head. I’m soo looking forward to your final. I want to see how you paint it. I toast you!

Originally posted by crazybread
[B]…Iguess I’m personally not feeling it when I look inside the woomb of a carying mother. I like your idea about her being pregnant, and nursing or carying embryos or eggs inside but having her display the woumb like a diorama is personally wierd to me. PLease don’t take it personally I’m just thinking outloud here. Perhaps when its done in photoshop and there will be some sort of glass on the belly when one can see whats happening inside. I love the concept but all I guess I was trying to say is that she looks hurt (although her face expression doesn’t convey that) I guess that does not compute in my head. I’m soo looking forward to your final. I want to see how you paint it. I toast you!
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its ok to think out loud CB. But during the initial posts i mentioned that there is the skin, then there is the retractable shielding and under them is a transluscent tissue. like a rubbery orb surrounding the baby. dont worry it wont be like a diorama. 
i toast you back

enzo
wow…i’m, like many have already said, very impressed by the crosshatching. the environment looks awesome though. i really love the whole effect it has on the peice. you do such great work.
and just because i love this happy face guy:buttrock:
I think it’s been said but it would feel more provocative if it wasn’t a human mother carrying the child or maybe a human mother carrying an animal pup… anyway keep it up, nice work.
I am glad u go with the whomb-theme!
Its a very outstanding idea and very well executed. I keep an big eye on this one:surprised
Cheerz:beer:
Tommy Lee
Great concept! This design would probably look good in 3D, too. Can’t wait to see more!
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Originally posted by bombproof
i’m doing studies on the fetus. thanks a lot leonardo da vinci.
lovelly image.
eheh i used a sketch of Leo for a work on deviantart
Originally posted by ternel
[B]nice art man…well are you going to do this in 3d?man can’t wait… [/B]
'sup ternel?
its going to be in 2d man.
enzo
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Wow pare 2d!!! Todo Galore!!! k man if you’re goin to do this in 2d this film will gonna kick some asssssss… (for sure not mine…hahahaha!) newei catchcha8ter.
