Machineflesh 2D Challenge Entry: Monsit Jangariyawong

#2

Hi ,there, I think I’m late , this is the layout of my composition , my main concept is , in the future , human use machine to fullfill their imagination in different form of art , this is a pair of dancer , they lost their body in war , but they still want to dance ! so , the machine is their answer !!

#3

this is the compositon I choose to develop , comments are welcome!!

#4

i like your composistion, it has a very fluid feeling and i think if thats the idea, you are trying to get across, then you have hit the nail on the head.
looking very nice

ps i enjoyed your thumbs, i like your thought process.

#5

Good sketches…and very nice idea…cool and peace idea…I like it.
Go on man, 'ld like to see more.

#6

yeah, me too… :slight_smile:

#7

I absolutely LOVE your loose pencil work… nice energy, great pose and character design! Looking forward to seeing updates on this one. :beer:

#8

Love your pencilwork and the compositin youve chosen looks awesome, i cant wait to see what your up to. Ill be watch out for this one. :thumbsup: :beer: :bowdown: :smiley:

#9

here is the coloring wip , comments are welcome!!

#10

It’s pretty obvious you dont want me to win anything.

Hey XIA also did character with multiple arms. You should check out his stuff also.

Ill be waiting for them colors. I dont think it will take that much time when youre doing them. :wavey:

Nice loosely lines. Why did you decided to change the pose?

#11

Hi , many thanks for your comments ,here is the update of my entry

#12

Nice Style, I like the looseness of it.:thumbsup:

#13

Bags of potential!!!

Strive on!

Paul

#14

YEAH ! Very nice ! I love the concept with divinity/human/machine ! And the drawing is just great ! I hope that you’ll finish this ! :bounce: :bounce:

#15

hi , this is another progress ,need your comments

#16

aaah come on, what are you waiting for ? i want this pic finished NOW !!!
…uuuhh just can’t wait to see the final pic, i simply WORSHIP your talent :bounce:

#17

hi! this is coloring so far , still have little time to fine tune , need more comments guys!!

#18

hi! this is coloring so far , still have little time to fine tune , need more comments guys!!

#19

Nice piece, like the composition a lot. I think maybe some heavier contrast could help as the shapes don’t quite stand out enough in some places? Just my two cents.

cheers!

#20

I agree with fishermanDavis, the characters blend into the background too much. Perhaps a bit of rim lighting to define their edges would help. It’s looking good though. They’re really dancing up a storm! :rolleyes:

#21

Cool!:buttrock:

I like colors.:thumbsup:

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