It’s really hard to find somethings to add or substract in your painting.
As some of us said before, the bike might be rusty to better mix with the other elements, and you surely have already tweak this.
Maybe try to add some coins in the bowl, but i don’t think that will really improve your image. All is already there and your painting is brilliant ! :buttrock:
Machineflesh 2D Challenge Entry: Antonio Ares Gastesi
Newke
#153
shawnalanpeters
#154
I shouldn’t even make the coment…I about to make …beacause it is simply personal taste…but looking at the overall quality and technique used on the painting… The eyes of the character seem out of place… have you considered a more realistic yee shape for the character… ? my personal opinion is that it would match the It looks like you have put a lot of time in to it…good work.
hdri
#155
little update. I’m working on the bike and bit details. The image is 25 % size.
I’ve added more light to the puppet, and desaturated the BG.
Luter
#156
May I give you a suggestion…I think this famous bike is not realy so important,…in fact i think that the bike could be a little bit in shadow…it’s too strong, it’s a focus out of the character…maybe you have just to suggest it, not too precisely…
anyway !
It’s a very, very good work…
Composition is great.
Drawing very nice and personnal.
Colors harmony is very good.
Idea…so much poetic and nice.
Congratulations !.
Luter
#157
May I give you a suggestion…I think this famous bike is not realy so important,…in fact i think that the bike could be a little bit in shadow…it’s too strong, it’s a focus out of the character…maybe you have just to suggest it, not too precisely…
anyway !
It’s a very, very good work…
Composition is great.
Drawing very nice and personnal.
Colors harmony is very good.
Idea…so much poetic and nice.
Congratulations !.
Luter
#158
May I give you a suggestion…I think this famous bike is not realy so important,…in fact i think that the bike could be a little bit in shadow…it’s too strong, it’s a focus out of the character…maybe you have just to suggest it, not too precisely…
anyway !
It’s a very, very good work…
Composition is great.
Drawing very nice and personnal.
Colors harmony is very good.
Idea…so much poetic and nice.
Congratulations !.
r3studios
#159
i DON`T think that i a future, that far, where a poor got that kind of technologie on his body, that there will be SUCH A BIKE like this. i think you need to think some more to find a bike deisgn which looks old, but still futuristic. cause this bike you got there would be 500 years old 
image when this kind of technologie would be available for a poor guy.
otherwise great image!
hdri
#161
Now the challenge is almost over, and there is no posibility to copy or appropiate ideas, somebody may find interesting to check other web contests with similar topics. I spetially like the photo fakes that appear in worth1000. If you want to check them, there they are:
TeemuR
#162
Haven’t I posted in this thread before? If not here it comes:
You have done great job!
Interesting idea and nice color scheme too.
Gotta love those squeezers in the hand!
Good luck! and don’t worry, you obviously have talent enough! 
duddlebug
#163
Absolutely fantastic job!!
I’ve not posted on your thread for a while now, but i’ve been dropping in to look at your progress and to admire your technique. I really like this entry (i used to do a street puppet show!!) and i think the finished image really does your concept justice.
Good luck!!
londero
#165
dude
this image
will fixed in my mind
for years!
Congratulations!!! I love the final image.
The colors, techinique, final aspect, composition, and the damn bicycle to complete the maddnes…
congratulations!!! :applause:
and FORCE
londero.
Del pecado de mi pueblo comen, y en su maldad levantan su alma.
Drumwhore
#166
I love it! Great idea, and you have some awesome skills 
I 've been staring at your pic for something like 2 minutes…
The only thing that looks a bit weird to me (I don’t know if it has been mentioned before) is the skin on his stomach… It looks too wrinkled for the straight position he’s having… But maybe that’s just me…
Anyway, congratulations!!
smilingdemon
#167
don’t worry about your talent, dude :bounce:
your pic is one of my topten favorite
shawnalanpeters
#169
nice finish… It’s cool seeing a different take on torn flesh… I have been struggling with it on my piece… looks like you put in a lot of time and work… good job… !
Shinwa
#171
:applause: I just want to say that A - you produced something very professional, so don’t even comment about talent level…I love the texture, it feels like a painting - hard for many people to do on a computer… and B Your idea is truly unique, it tells a story in and of itself that I have seen nowhere else. Your expression for him is also GREAT…I feel like I could run into this guy in some back alley somewhere and he might try and get me to toss some change… Good Job.
hdri
#172
Thank you very much, Shinwa, fot your encouraging and optimistic comments! They’re are as helpful as serious critics for me. I hope there will be soon a new contest, becouse I’ not in the challenge, due to a small technical problem, and I was so interested in participating, just to know how my work sounds in the world… It will be next time. Meanwhile, comments like yours are really appreciated! Thank you again!