Hi sad. I don’t know what the critic said but i urge you to keep going!
When i was reading your entry page, with each update you had more passion and excitement evident in what you were writing and also in your character.
Do not let comments or criticism affect that. IF it was construtive criticism then we have to accept it. Anything that was not constructive does not belong here.
Keep it up sad, your style is very unique and i personally love it. You pay attention to detail and yet it is stylized. I can’t wait to see the finished product sad! Keep going buddy!!!
I’m very serious!