Living Toons - Character - Poju

#47

ohhhhhhh… the peace in the park when its dark… lol your on a sandbox… :beer:

#48

We have here couple of saying’s well those ar always hard to translate but i’ll try.

If u are in hurry, sit down it goe’s by
What’s the hurry in completed world

If u keep those in mind life is little less stresfull;)

Here is little update. Plan is to make few plant’s, couple of car’s and sidewalk, maybe something for buildings those seems little dull. Any crit is welcome

#49

yeah should try to keep that saying in mind :slight_smile:
anyway I think the one with the stars and smaller building windows more, somehow they make the scene more serene. what do you think? okay its your job so its your choice :thumbsup:

i got to go rig my animation entry now se ya…

PS : Poju you look a bit like that Chris Martin dude from Coldplay

#50

Here is another update for ya

#51

kunnon suomalainen jätkä… juo kaljaa ja kalastaa…:thumbsup: nice modelling.

#52

Kalaan o pakko päästä prkl ku jäät vähä haittaa harrastusta no jos talven :beer:

And now something completly different:

I like this much better and your job is to tell me how to improve it:wip:

Edit: How is it bossible that non enghlis speakin person with 38,8C bodytemperature can’t type right:eek:

Ps I feel like somebody stuffed razorblades to my throat, pees to my nose and hitted with hammer to every single muscle of my body, but imagination run’s wild:bounce:

#53

Hi again.

The last one is MUCH better, and not because the lighting is different, but because the lighting is better, and more interesting as well.

Anyway, I think there are some zones that still look too dark. Add some more lights…

:beer:

#54

:beer:

hee hee
very nice. I like the dopey eyes. it’s amazing how much character it adds to the model. Great Work!

Nico

#55

WOOOOWW!!

i’m always impressed in seeing what lightning can do to a scene!!!
i like it!!!

as said, try adding more subtle lights (perhaps a skylight from above simulating the star light ?)

and give the yellow light a warmer tone, right now it seems to come from carlights, make it more fire-like!(unless you want it to look that way, it could be cool… the guy doesn’t even want to light a fire!!)

#56

Thanks for kind words everyone. I made some changes, now it is warmer and softier i think.Anyway here is what i got now:

Any crit

#57

hey Poju, very nice work so far. and what a nice hobby, I wouldn’t mind being there in the pic :cool:

I have a couple of suggestions, I made a repaint of your pic in PS to show you.
click image for larger view

it’s mainly some DOF(gaussian in PS) to the sky and sea, to put you and your ‘fishTools’ in focus. as that’s the main importance in the scene, at least for me.
also sharpened up your face a little to add to that effect.

I also added a slightly blue tint to the image(in PS, colorBalance, midtones: -40, -20, +50) to make it a little calmer and more relaxing. as that’s seams to be one of your hobby to :wink:

ofcourse nothing you have to do if you don’t wan’t to, just ideas. good work so far,
take care

#58

Thanks for comments my friends!

Fellah: Thanks for cool ideas. This update is for you, well plugins wont work in current wersion of Blender and it take some twaeking to open it in older one, but i made it for you and for DOF, i allso made my lights little cooler. Hope you like. And thanks for changing your avatar back, that Totitch parody war aful, i liked your pirate parrot most tough

Virtuoso: Have you somekind obsession about that jumping fish:) , just kidding. I might just do that if i have time and you stole my idea about that little fish in bucket. What comes to those labels for bottles, well since textures are forbitten, i think that it’s not worth it to model them:D

I’m not sure if this is step foward, should i change lights back? And those new eyes(for some odd reason i had to make them) are too “sharp” and takes some charisma away i think. Well i keep tweaking and you keep that crit coming so we can make smethin out of this mess, ok?

#59

Woah, I really like the mood of this, congrats.

Again, very nice! :thumbsup:

#60

Wow… this scene looks really terrific. Great lighting! :beer:

(s)

#61

really great! I tried to find something else to crit, but couldn’t. just add some small things like the fish in the bucket etc… and I think it will be even better.
hope you’ll get around to texture it a little after the challenge to, I think textures in this lighting will make it just perfect.

>>>“And thanks for changing your avatar back, that Totitch parody war aful”
ahahaha! np… :smiley:

#62

Thanks you all.

I made few little changes and added fishing line and lil fish. Fish seems little odd, but i’m working on it. I’m not sure about DOF, ill give it a try when i work out everything else, it’s pain in tha butt to tweak and render in my crappy pc(Celeron 566@850), but i’m getting there.

Need comments about DOF or not DOF?
Well anything else what comes in mind is welcome too

#63

Ha, cool fish.

About DOF, I don’t think it’s that important if you have it if its gonna be a hassle.

#64

defintely getting better and better. i really like the new lighting and the stars.
dof would be okay but be carefull not to eliminate the stars cause without them itll be rather plain. and what about the moon? the grey circle shadow on it rather strange, i dunno its just me.

#65

excellent, that is a much better render. DOF sure! :rolleyes: put some it will make the picture better?

great work :beer:

#66

Thanks for all.

Little hurry now, but here is couple of renders

Some crappy bumbs

Later in that evening

See ya