Just keep hacking away and working hard Erilaz…I love your ambition and dedication,vital keys for anyone,you have tons of it.I see you get better each month,you really have a great determination,it will pay off in the end.It shows with each passing month…Congrats to you…:applause: 
Living Toons - character - Erilaz
Virtuoso
#41
erilaz
#42
Thanks very much Virtuoso. You’re a great encouragement!
Although my model looks etremely worried that his head is not looking good. I sort of agree. Back to work!:hmm:
KingMob
#43
I htink you have the starting of a great head here, I would add more to the brow, cheek and move the mouth in a bit, usually, even in cartoon, the mouth ends about half way between the eyes, if that makes sense…
Just keep luggin away cause It’s almost there I think, I did the worried look.
three
#44
:wavey: nice to see you too, it’s been a while. i’m sketching away over here, trying to get the feeling i want into the picture. i can see your model’s shaping up. you’ve got a certain style to it… i dig it dude. 
and if i’m to get my vertices pumping you’d better get those polys jumping 
[oh no! not the bad rhyming again!]
:wip:
erilaz
#45
KingMob: Good advice. I’m working on those areas now. I don’t want him to look worried yet (although it’s often I look I have!). Thanks buddy!
Three:Hee hee! We could start a really bad CG rap:
The vertices jumpin’ and the polygons pumpin’,
displacment maps are bumpin’ and the particles are clumpin’.
Edgeloop the face, and sketch up or trace,
'Cause we got dat modelling all over the place!
Break it down! Insert turntable scratching here
After that shameless display of lyrical garbage, here’s an angrier face. Still not the look I’m going for.
erilaz
#46
Yay! My body looks so much better than my head! (That’s possibly true for the real me as well!).
KingMob
#47
you know, I was just looking at your sketch and I figured out what been bugging me. Its your jaw. and mouth, they are to “broad” in the concept sketch they have that anime “point” to em. I think you should try and get that look more and your head would look great!
just my opinion.
erilaz
#48
Once again KingMob, you are the observant guru. Thanks! I thought there was something weird going on. More today sometime!
KingMob
#50
yeah, baby, yeah!
:buttrock:
Keep on rockin man, lookin good!..hehe You gonna model a custom tea cup or use your avatar’s?
erilaz
#51
The avatar cup was done in a max 5 demo, so no, I’ll be doing a brand new one in my old max 4.2!
Clanger
#53
Looking good, your deffinately improving every challenge wont be long before your kicking serious butt.
The size of the iris (is that the right word?) is bothering me I’d like to see the whites of your eyes more.
KingMob
#54
yeah more whites…
Also your head in the sketch looked much bigger, i think you should keep with that look. just be carefull not to look like a midget hehe.
erilaz
#55
Thanks Clanger. It’s good to see I’m getting lots of posts saying I’m improving! Yay!
KingMob: Yeah, the head will be bigger. Still working on the proportions.
The irises are supposed to be quite large, but they may be a little too large. I’ve also got to change the colour of the irises to brown! (My eyes aren’t blue).:wip:
erilaz
#56
Right now you’re probably thinking “Hey that image looks like a black blob of nothing with two white circles on it.” Well, you’re almost right!
These are the evil ninja foes of my character. Or they will be, when I’m done modelling them! Try to guess my influence.:wip:
three
#57
Heeey! That black dude reminds me of Invader Zim, his dog/robot. But well, his dog is green, and looks stupid While this one looks cool.
Love the simplicity of the basic shape… it’d be cool if you had their eyes sort of bounce around, not really attached to the head… I mean, damn, that would be annoying to fight
Cheers
/:King3
KingMob
#58
I would guess Samrai Jack or Zim…both veryfantastic influences in my opinion! looks cool
erilaz
#60
Hmm… I don’t know if you’re complimenting me or being sarcastic!:hmm:
If you’re complimenting me, thanks!