Living Toons - 3D - ila_solomon

#41

good! You will texture it?:cool:

#42

Great idea, 2D sketch and modelling. To be honest the lips could be worked on more, they do not look as alive as the other parts of your model. :slight_smile:
I was being critical, but the truth is that it’s clear that you have a real artist in you.

#43

Great Ila, good idea, it looks like you really and a HQ renders
are your trademark too:thumbsup:

crit: You are modeling organic toon in a somehow technical
way, split polys more, brake it up, make it look less industrial
and more organic…

I allways enjoy looking at your work:)

#44

Hi ila…I am quite busy with finishing touches on my last challenge entry,texturing and getting some hi-rez shots from all the seperate models, getting them all perfect for my growing portfolio…Plus I am still quite busy with my gigantic private project,it’s getting there little by little,soon I can show some of it, I hope…:wink: But next challenge is already pulling at me strongly,I will leave this one to you and the other guys here.I sure hate to miss out on all the fun…:slight_smile:

       I am very happy to hear about the wings and head's hair/feathers & tail you plan on...................It's already top notch,with those additions it really will be fun to see. So I'll see you after your next up-date ila.............Keep them coming....:beer:
#45

Russo, emmm…not sure! :wink:
afrodite, hmmm. yah, you point at a good thing i think, let me see what i can do to the lips, thanx :slight_smile:
Mandrake, aha thats the point! you are right, i think i was going to do a clean sculpture, i should wait untill it’ll be finished, then i see how much NOISES he would need! :wink: thanx a lot , you are a master modeler! :thumbsup:
Virtuoso looking forward friend :beer:
Regards
Ila
here is a wing shot:

#46

& a front view:

#47

Nice Idea , Nice progress … :thumbsup:

…mmm what’s your plan for his Brow ? do you want to Add more Detail something like small feathers or Curly furs to his Brow ? …

Just a Quick feel … Am I wrong ? is it a symmetrical ?

Keep up good working …
:bounce:

#48

Nice modelling and lighting. Are you going to assign different colors or are you done? I really like it. very nice.

#49

Looks great so far!
Very good modeling.

Two things I could suggest:

1.) I think you should get rid of those first 3 rows of small feathers on the chin, and make it into just 1 or 2 rows of larger feathers, so they fit into the mesh better.

2.) Add those feather things to the eyebrows!

Cant wait to see the final product.
-DivideByZero-

#50

:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: it’s going to be wholesome I think.

#51

more details if possible

you wanna me get killed?! :wink:

The perfect blue crystal waters of the Adriatic on the Montenegro coast

:smiley: LOOOL!

small feathers or Curly furs to his Brow ?

yup!

Am I wrong ? is it a symmetrical ?

exactly! in the end i’ll fix it. don’t worry

Are you going to assign different colors or are you done?

indeed

I think you should get rid of those first 3 rows of small feathers on the chin, and make it into just 1 or 2 rows of larger feathers, so they fit into the mesh better.

well, honestly i have a feeling that he need very small feathers as like as huge ones, i think. thank you anyway :thumbsup:

:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: + :beer:

Regards
Ila

#52

ila_solomon you are the winner - u know it? :slight_smile:

#53

:smiley: LOL! I don’t know really! others came along strongly! thanx a lot for the nice word swag :beer:

here the update:

#54

:slight_smile: :wink: sorry i was tired!

#55

wow - thats looks so great - but dont lose the toonish look - if u make the mesh too complex the toon look will gone

#56

:slight_smile: heheeh yes you are right, i think i’ve lost the control! :wink:
no more detail will be added.

#57

:bowdown:

#58

:bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:

After this contest is over, you should give some serious thought into making a short animation with this model.

Superb Job.
-DivideByZero-

#59

Impressive, Ila
I don’t know how, but this is getting better and better.

Those textures are amazing, but remember you’re not suppossed to use any textures for this challenge…
And as swag said, don’t lose the toonish look!

:thumbsup:

There goes my post number 300…

#60

wow, for me this is the best living toon of the bunch, brilliant work, but a bit too complex to be really cartoony… but who cares, fantastic work