Light house scene


#1

Hey guys! :wip: can you give me your opinions on this scene plz ?
This is greatly appreciated :bowdown:
Scene, rendering and post effects are made with Blender (no touchup)



#2

This is looking very promising! Keep going!


#3

Hi. Decent scene. The main issues I’m seeing are a lack of detail.

The water really looks amazing. The transition between the water and the sky looks good, although maybe a bit too definite?

The lighthouse looks like it needs more details such as bump maps. Looks like you need to set the top smooth.

The land is lacking a lot of detail. It looks decent for a sort of mask texture, but there isn’t enough actual detail, for it to be convincing.

The tree’s look like thier from a game. The leaves look like paper cutouts. You should either go all the way to make them realistic looking, or find a way to hide them a bit more.

Lastly, it looks like you forgot Fresnel on everything. This is extremely important, and will add a lot to this scene.

I hope this was helpful.