Lauras Face and Body

#1

here is what i have today. i am thinking to move on for texturing and rigging. may be you call me nuts and i should do this and that. well…i only have two eyes so critics are welcome anyway
Georges

#2

Can i have her phonenumber? :wink:

Great work man, the body looks amazing. Maybe she has a little too much hair, but other than that absolutly great work!!

Looking forward to see her completly textured.

#3

forgot to add on this one. just to have the things together to watch .

about the full hair…it will disapear soon as i use transmap

Georges

#4

I would take a look at the knees again cause they just don’t look right. could we get some wire to look at by chance?

Ed

#5

hello Georges, I hope you do rememember me :smiley:

Anyway, I think your model is superb, the muscle definition is just great. Would you mind sharing some wires to look at the topology?

Overall I only have two comments, and these are really minor, (maybe you have already considered them??):

  1. By the T position, I assuming that you are rigging this so it seems to me that calves would normally look more strained in the pose that you are posting, and the buttocks also, they seem a little too relaxed by the way she is standing…

  2. This is more of a subjective comment, it seems that she is a little bit too thin for the muscle mass and body fat she apparently has… maybe you aimed for this for the start? or maybe you want a more realistic look? Either way she does look attractive and can’t wait to see her with a nice white creamy sss … and as always, your hair rocks :buttrock:

Mauricio

#6

hi Mauricio

of course i remember you. did you signed up on my forum alreday ? are you one of the guys
with a short cut name ? i think i have open up a domain for you( under your name ) there :sad:
to your idea about Laura. i will go over the points you’ve mentioned. think the best is to rigg here now and do al the little details by morph targets. i personally like the legs much may be i do not " capito " completely what you can see. to relaxed that i can see. that’s overdone with the relax tool may be.

Ed :
you right there is something wrong. i’ve noted that, soon as i did the upload. but i don’t know exactly what’s wrong. so let’s grap the reference pictures again …thanks:) great hompage you have but not fully working ? anyway very elegant i like it much

#7

wow she is beautiful,
awesome job

#8

hi~ i love the body part very much ,looks very good :scream:
i’m try to make a girl too, but i know little about anatomy,can u show some tutorial you followed and wire?
thx u very much
i agree with mac666er’s comments too,it’s also useful to me:bounce:
good luck,and sorry for my english.

#9

Great work, I have a question for you. You mind being part of a small project? You are a great artist.

#10

i like the model, but how are you going about for the hair.
is the hair commin from the program or you going to model it better
or texture??

can we see some wire frames

#11

Student from China :
amazing i talk with people from china…i love it…slap the politician’s :slight_smile:
sorry i am having a hard time to keep your name in mind …lol
don’t think you’ll need a lot of help on your model. i assume i’ve put a comment
into your corner ?? i am not sure . anyway you do great for sure

Kurosaki :
hmm …hard to say. depend on the project and my time of course.
and finally i don’t know if i am good enough…but if you like just tell me
what’s going on
georges.walser@bluewin.ch

D3Stroyer :

don’t take the hair to serious :slight_smile: i was playing around to make here more sexy
but in general it is the way i go. you might think it has too much volume ?
it is not at the end …it is just the way i work the hole thing out. don’t want to say
it is a good way. it is the way i am used to do…
here is a rough wip renderer with some hair i like .


btw. i am having a smal forum for people that does work with a virtually actress.
it is empty right now because it is new. should be a isolated place only for that.
may be some of you like to work more concentrated. not more then 20 people
specially Mauricio…and he knows verrrrrrry well why isn’t it ? :slight_smile:
may be some of you like it
but again say sorry …nothing fancy right now. i need to adjust the forum software
and making a homepage first

www.lauras-home.ch

#12

Very sexy legs, although from the front the top of the knees do need fixing. The face is very nice, and I like the hair too.

Looking forward to an update.

#13

your girl looks tallish,i love that proportion,maybe that is a standard for west girls
but it’s really good,my girl is short,i don’t know how to make it looks tallish and have a nice proportion
as you have done
good luck

#14

tbb :

if i would meet that western girl on the street i would have a heart attack right away:scream: She is heavy idealized. may be on some sport meeting you could grasp one and mix it with with some
czech supermodels. with the friendly help of a beauty surgeon may be finally Laura
would come real.
serious :
personally i do not look for super reality ( my face early at the morning at the bath room window is enough )
i just let my mind flow and try to get something that it is possible to see …it’s made by cg.
so long as it looks cool i am happy…well it is a long way at all. your Lady has a very sweet face
gentle as i am i did not looked too much on the body :smiley:
i did some smal updates as requested and i’ve put a skeleton underneath Laura’s Skin
thanks for looking
Georges

#15

Excellent modeling, especially the torso. Seems very clean as well…i’m curious to have a look at the topology.
I’ll keep an eye on this :). Cheers!

#16

had no time over weekend. i did some small changes on the body and face topology.
body and face isn’t welded yet. symetry in max does not work proper so leave better like that till ia m really sure i can’t do more anylonger.
there are some sharp edges at the knee etc.
just with some differnet colors to see how she will look may be
Georges

can somebody tell me how to add on a short cut link like " Laura " instead of copy the full link to my actually work thread ?
the link below does not work with my browser Firefox and IE
thanks

#17

Try this in your signature:

Laura

This should get the link to show up properly. I don’t use Firefox, so you’ll have to check it out on your machine. If you’ve already tried this, then I have no idea what’s going on :scream:

Edit: I see that the link was automatically condensed. It’s

[u r l=http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?t=3808038/]Laura[/u r l] with the spaces removed from the “u r l” on each end.

#18

Hi… really, really nice model. Currently working on a head myself… Could you show a wire of the hair? or maybe the tutorial on how you did it? Just wondering :stuck_out_tongue:
Looking really good.

-thondal-

#19

oberon :
when i click on your provided link then it does the same …it says i have to choose a forum.
but i will try to change the link as you mentioned. unfortunately i know nothing about that
internet stuff. very bad i know…less then a beginner :frowning:
i was just wondering how you can make a short cut from a long boring link :slight_smile:
thondal :
don’t take the hair serious, i did if for fun. when you have a close look you can see that i’ve bended some tubes around Lauras head. well it is not a good solution, it looks full and rich till i put the transparent map on. the you can see the empty tube and all is gone. you might scroll back to this thread, there is a picture from Laura with real fully long hair and this is made with shag hair .

#20

Your link has an extra “8” at the end that’s why it’s not working!

Your model’s great. Chunky hair but it looks kinda cool. There’s a wierd line around her neck though, is that a seam?

Nice work, watching for updates.