Lagoon wip

#1

Hi all, Can I get some crits and comments please?
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#2

good start & a good theme too
I think the red forground elements are too much of a contrast against the rest,while I usualy like bold color use in overcast environments I dont think its working here.maybe adding some red to the center building might work better?
the buildings & mountain on the left side could use some more haze,currently those buildings dont sit very well and look pasted on.
I think the image might read better if you cropped away most of the lower half & some of the far left side.maybe even lose the lily pads(if you do keep the pads be sure to fix that dark reflection & also the soft edge)

looking forward to seeing the final :arteest:

Cheers

#3

Cool atmosphere.
I agree with Stefan-Morrell about lily pads — too rough work.
And these three buildinds in the left corner like floating in the air.

#4

Hi, good going here your headed on the right direction.

I think those are not “floating buildings” but an gate. I might suggest replacing that gate and change its position, because it really does look likedloating buildings.

I have to agree with the lilli pads too, needs a little bit of attention, looks very pasted. The shrine looks too sharp too based from all the grass you have surrounding it.

Overall all great work, a little more push and your there. :smiley:

#5

Thanks for the comments everyone. I’ll do some more work on it and post an update. Eyecon,
you’re right, It is a gate( entrance to china town in Vancouver B.C.).

#6

Hi all,here’s a couple of different updated versions. C&C welcome.

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#7

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