Just finish a new pic...what can i improve?

#1

I know theres not many people draw this style , but please write some comment~lol

#2

Hey there.

Manga style is quite popular so it’s not quite accurate that not alot of people draw like this. Anyway you should draw what you love and not what other people are drawing so keep it on. As to your piece I really love your colors. As to how you can improve, well it kind of depends if you’re trying to get a more realistic effect or keep with the manga style stuff. If you want to improve your draftmanship a good way to start is to try out all the workshops in this forum, which are all great. If it’s better manga you’re looking for then I cant be of much help since I have no expierience in this kind of art. Though I suppose it’s all connected so if you’d improve your draftmanship you’d also improve you manga work. Hope that helps.

#3

Cool work man, i really like it. The only thing that stands out to me is the colors appear to be really desaturated. However at the same time maybe thats what you were going for since it does give it a nice soft feeling to it especially with the clouds/sky in the BG.

#4

I think you did a great job, I really like the way you rendered the clouds. There is only a couple of things that I notice that might help the piece out: One is to move the letters down and to the right a little because it seems like the left side is a little unbalanced, and jump the contrast up on the girl, the colors seem to be to desaturated and light making here appear to be further back in areial perspective. Ofcourse these are only suggestions, you have already done a good job.

#5

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