Hello Everyone,
This one sounds like fun, Look forward to seeing what everyone comes up with.
My Idea is to have marty in the Foreground and Doc in the BKG. Marty makes his way back to the van. Doc is pushing some Plutonium to the end of the van, he stops and deliveres his line…
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JEFF
Hi all,
Here is a blocking of Marty. I’m pretty late in the game with my posts, but I’ll try to finish this one. :banghead:
Marty’s mouth is not too refined, I just posed his mouth with his body.
Doc is hiding behind a box at the moment.
Comments, Concerns, Critiques
JEFF
Hey! it looks pretty cool, the only thing i can say is doc’s “style” pose… i would suggest him to hit the accent of “style” a few frames earlier… as in hitting the extreme of the pose a few frames earlier, before he says style… it should give more of a delivery to the line, he would be “going somewhere” more 
Well done…I agree with the hitting the pose a couple of frames before style…but other than that I think it works…like the changes you made to the models btw…good stuff:)
I love the doc posing and faffing around, nice stuff. Although, Marty walking backwards does strike me as slightly odd. Why is he walking backwards?
Well,
The way I have it is, Marty’s on the look out for police, terrrorists, etc…He can’t seem to fathom the idea of this time machine, so he asks the Doc about it. Instead of having him turn around then walk towards doc he kinda rushes back to talk to him. It gives more reason for him to be out of breathe as well. Hope this makes sense.
I made the change to the style poses. I have it so Doc hits that pose a few frames earlier.
Thanks for the comments. Hopefully more soon.
JEFF
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