Isthmus - Motion Graphic Story

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Hey all,

Been building this for a long time and I want to make it better. Let me know what I can do to improve it:

Episode 1:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9TZuINU9gR8

Episode 2:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S5ZEJkmNq5c

Thanks for your time.