iso surprise


#1

hello
any critiques are welcome

Links : https://youtu.be/7bDs2-RAlfY


#2

Hey there… your consistency with these uploads is impressive! What is your intention with these animations? Will you actually be making corrections?

For this animation, I think the man’s first reaction seems off. I’d let the monster finish walking so the viewer can have an easier time moving from one character to the next. You might even keep the monster completely off frame at first to not compete with the man. The man would read much better if he were standing alone…holding the flowers… and clearly looking around for his date. That premise is way too rushed in the beginning!

Hope this helps!


#3

ok lot of thanks this help me