Interior : 'Outdoor bath'

#1

Hi, this image is ‘Outdoor bath’ (a part of public bath interior project)

3d Max5.1, V-ray, Photoshop.

#2

Looks very nice! :thumbsup:
However, it is a bit too obvious that the bush around the edge of the pool is the same one repeated over and over. If you have Photoshop, try using the Clone Stamp tool to make a bit more randomness to the pattern of the bushes.

Other than that, nice job! :buttrock:

#3

yeah looks pretty good, i agree about the bush, although i didn’t pick it up until i read that. i think that the umbrellas are looking/placed a little too perfect. same with the chairs. also with the background i don’t think the blue stars are really working. too blue.

the lights in the ground work well, all in all it looks pretty good.

#4

pretty good, like the other two said add some randomness or variation to the bushes. Also do the same for the umbrellas and chairs in the background. Move them around a bit make them look like they’ve been used and tampered with, if you can change the backs of the chairs so they’re at different angles.

The modeling is great, the lighting is nice and the water effect is excellent. keep up the good work. :thumbsup:

#5

thanks for your suggest.

i’ll check them ^ ^;

#6

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