That’s definitely an improvement, imageflood 
There is an odd blotchiness to it now though, perhaps from a rough bump map? It looks a little sandpapery.
I think the lips could definitely do with even more red, and the areas around his eyes could also do with more tonal variation (very subtle blues and reds), and maybe some wrinkles too, since this guy is clearly no spring chicken 
For translucency and all that, have you seen Julian J’s tutorial on “Dr Julian”? I’m not sure where the current link for it is because I think he moved his site recently, but try searching through Google for it. If you haven’t seen it before, I HIGHLY recommend checking it out because he details his Maya/Photoshop texturing process in exquisite detail, and his final result is awesome. A very valuable resource for anyone working on skin, especially in Maya 








