"HMC # 30 - Forbidden Planet - Rage and Jojo"

#7

a good start, I think you could go down in subdivs and work on the proportions more loosely :slight_smile: Also the corners of her mouth feel really forced downwards, rather unnaturally. Keep going :wip:

#8

Yeah I looked everywhere, but couldn’t find the poster for Close Encounters of The Forbidden Planet. :smiley:

Thanks for the crits Magda. She doesn’t look so much like an alien or a frog anymore haha. Sometimes you just need to walk away and come back for it all to come into perspective.

-rage

#9

Joel that is so true, sometimes its a whole new experience to walk away and come back to something your working on. And also having someone give a hint can do wonders :slight_smile: I look forward to see your newly upgraded work.

#10

Thanks to feedback from jojo, Magda, my gf, and a couple friends I’ve changed a lot of the proportions, forms, and gesture. I also redid the dress and it fits her much better now.

@aevosen: Thanks for stopping by :slight_smile:

Crits and comments, of course, are more than welcome.


-rage

#11

there’s robby :wink: still to do some thweak (oring near the arms and also to decide how the glass shield intersect the “head” any idea ?)


#12

More work on Alta. I still want to define the arms a little bit more…some final details in the face. Then will be posing her and moving on to the finer details and sculpting the hair.


-rage

#13

In proportion your eyes are too big.

To eye and mouth have to make a triangle

for the next image the topology is wrong but the proportion are good:

#14

I probably wouldn’t even call the proportions correct in that example, I’d post a better one but I’m on my iPad

#15

I like the work on robby, :thumbsup:
I was thinking that the Girl of the Poster looks like Nicole Kidman, perhaps you could find some photos of she as reference to tweak the face and body. I like your team!

#16

So do I. i have post my reference on my ipad.

#17

No fighting, you two… :smiley:

Thanks for the crit scote. Robbi’s right the proportions on that mesh are a little off but it still serves its purpose perfectly and you are right now that you mention it the eyes are too big. I will change them tonight. They were a bit of a problem area for me so I hadn’t been working them very much. A nudge in the right direction was just perfect.

So thanks guys :smiley:

@greenpizza: Thank you for the comment and suggestion :slight_smile:

-rage

#18

Any more updates!?:wip:

#19

Coming! I got the robby mesh from Jojo and have been posing Alta, but nothing worth a wip update yet. Mother’s day was a busy weekend so no work was done on my part :slight_smile:

-rage

#20

Onto more detailing now…fixing the bulges and all that fun stuff.

-godeshus

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#23

nice progress so far… but does she need to have silicon breasts? i think it looks a bit strange that they don’t seems to be affected by her pose.

thats the only thing that caught my I. the rest looks fine to me.

cheers

#24

Thanks man.

I tend to prefer breasts a little more droopy and natural looking myself but the girl in the movie poster is quite perky and pinup-y so that is the direction I took, even though I’m not following the ref exactly.

-rage

#25




waiting for alta to pose and then comp with original fonts :wink:

#26

wow very nice choice!! makes me wanna try one of these one time really great work so far keep it up!