OK … pictures are worth a thousand words. So I did some manipulations and scribbled notes all over one of your images. My primary concern is that he’s looking a little too much ‘anatomically correct’ for a toon.
I skrunched him up pretty good so he doesn’t appear to be 7 feet tall and added more bulk in a lot of areas. Notice the added wieght around the ribs and less definition on the arms.
If you put my image and your image on separate layers in photoshop and toggle between the two, you can see most of the changes pretty easily.
His feet still are a problem. I’ve added a few scribbles so that you can see what the geometry should be like.
Then … of course, he still needs his accesories. 















C’mon…


