Hello! Critique please!


#1

Hello! I am new to this site and I am currently going to school for animation. I would really appreciate some critiques on my animations so I can improve. Thank you!

here is my most recent assignment.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=864kAGgMtoI

CCM261


#2

You need to hold the back foot for longer on the ground and roll it more before it lifts off, which will in turn push your body forward and into balance.
Also there is not enough weight shifts from side to side when he is walking and especially on the very last tiny step around f 99.
The legs are too straight on the last pose.
I like the overlap of the hand action at the end.

-Yasha


#3

Thank you very much! I shall touch up those parts!


#4

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