As the clavicle is, it’s a little incongruous with the rest of your model. If you have to make it, at least make sure it extends to where it’s supposed to (acromioclavicular joint). OR, perhaps tone it down a little bit, so that you have these very shallow, rounded hills that gradually sharpen towards the center, most prominent at the sternoclavicular ligaments. So that it just hints at them, instead of looking like you popped an extrude on a couple of faces and left it there.
I’m not saying so much that you have to keep the anatomy in a cartoon realistic. It just doesn’t seem to fit the way it is.
By the way, the edge flow on your shoulder is great!
HAHAHA Oops, I stepped on Aaron. Sorry man, it didn’t show me your post until AFTER I replied. Not sure why, since your’s is well before mine.







