Yeray Cabrera Del Pino has entered the Grand Space Opera 3D.
Grand Space Opera 3D Entry: Yeray Cabrera Del Pino
yeray
#2
A few original habitants of the Terminus System remains alive. Just a few of us can remember how all started. The great part of them believe that the Naghorh invasion came first, and then the Crimson Army came the free the entire system. Others think that the Crimson Army conquered the capital planet, while the Naghorh began to invade the outer planets. And finally some of us believe that were trapped in a conflict that has nothing to do with us.
Probably we are all wrong. Its doesnt matter now. The battles outbreaks one by one. The primal rage of the Naghorh and the unstoppable fury of the soldiers of the Crimson Army has taken away the life of the people of Terminus I and II. Both planets has became into seas of fire and ashes, for when both armies understands that the planet wont be totally under their control, they prefer to obliterate the surface from their space ships.
Terminus III wont resist much longer. Our planetary defences fell long time ago, and the few of us that remains alive are hiding in the city ruins, waiting for the next artillery hit that definitely kill us. How will all finish? Will both races extinguish? Will they destroy the entire system just to expand their blind war to the rest of the galaxy? Only time knows…
luigithekid
#4
I really like your story. Since the story is told by one of Terminus inhabitants, it would be nice to see some of that in the concept. Terminus people watching the fight would add a lot in terms of the story. Good luck!
luigi
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