Nice colors man, but I would advice to reduce the clouds. They are too big and cover too much of the sky. The feeling of division between the foreground and background is disturbed by this. Good luck!
Grand Space Opera 3D Entry: Sebastian J. Gomez
BC1967
#34
GREAT CONCEPT! I loved that book too. And… Rama!
The character sketches are wonderful, weird and beautiful at the same time, very otherworldly. Keep going!
My only suggestion would be to push the camera angle even more. Try taking it down to the walkers, seeing the shepards and the Enity from a POV inside their eyeline.
rashaverak
#36
wow! lots of replies!
gmillereight:i couldn’t finde WH30000 pics :s post a few if u have, plz!
arturro: excellent, when i was making the colour sketch, there was something on the background that was anoying me, but i didnt see what was it! u r right! but i really like big clouds… so, i think im gonna reduce them a bit, and make vertically larger the final image, so ill have space to play with the sky and separate better the fore and the background (maybe i could desaturate a bit the background, or changing its color balance, makin almost an unique tone… ill see) thnx!
BC “mil nueve sesenta y siete” :D: yes, i was thinkin on it, pushing more the angle not only will give me a more detailed view, i think it will bring more power to the scene, but for the colouring sketch i didnt redraw the scene, i used the old sketch and painted on in 
too lazy and short of time
worleyclarence: i didnt understand the question :s
greetings!
rashaverak
#37
okz some modelling of the Pillars… the solid structure is quite simple, so im working out the red clothes, but here is what i got so far
SnakeFarlow
#38
Wow nice concept, When could I see more modelings, I hope that will be soon.
I will keep one eye in your work.
Take a look of my images www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=184160
Snake Farlow. The rogue.
rashaverak
#40
im done jokin
its a 3D sketch of the scene
the sky’ll be higher, ill do it in post, but i dont know if its allowed to do that in this category, ill read the rules
rashaverak
#41
dammnn im too busy , i think im not gonna finish it at time :s
some color test i forgot to submit
blackdragoncg
#43
Hi there! I just want to say i think you are a talented artist! I really like the concept sketches you have done there! some awsome style and imagination there. I wish you luck with your entry.
Kind regards
Gary
My Thread http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=191177&highlight=Gary+Picton
rashaverak
#44
thnx , i really apreciate yr words, man!
im sad, cause i dont think im gonna make it… the same with machineflesh contest 
greetings!
essencedesign
#45
Well a great concept anyways…I would still love to see those walkers modeled out…so weather it’s for the contest or not…get on IT… :argh:
SnakeFarlow
#48
I really like your art, but I dont understand what are you trying to do. Those flags, the big sphere bihind, looks great but I dont get what it really is. Are you going to insert some people or ships, It will be really good. I hope so.
rashaverak
#49
thnx for the motivating words, guys i found some time, im modelling the shepherd, still, im not gonna make it… anyway, ill finish it, someday 
mista farlow :): in the reply #22 i wrote a short version of the history, i promess i ll wrote more before i finish the work in first place, i considered to place some ships in the sky, but i think it will disturb the spiritual feeling that im triyin to show in the scene , but i will think it if i see i cant finish the work for the contest
greetings!
Climax
#50
Sketchs are looking good Sebastian, Time is running out
still, im not gonna make it… anyway, ill finish it, someday
Work hard, It would be great, and you know you can make it! 
blackdragoncg
#51
Please finish this at some stage i would really like to see the complete image:bounce:
Until then good luck with your works i hope you do well.
Kind regards
blackdragon
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