heya
great character sketches… looking very promising… hoping to see something in 3d soon
Grand Space Opera 3D Entry: Sebastian J. Gomez
Sharga
#29
I especially like the use of details for your character sketches. That second sketch of the scene is much more dramatic and compelling. Extreme perspective=sweet. My only suggestion is to make one of the shepherds really close up in the foreground, so the viewer feels like he/she’s being herded along with the masses.
rashaverak
#30
thnx for the c&c , guys! i really “apreciate” ("" means im not sure how to write it :P) them
Sharga: thnx for the suggestion! i was thinkin to make a Shepherd very close to the camera, but when yr idea of suiting the viewer like he/she’s being herded along with the masses, that gave me the camera angle i was looking for! thnx 
ill post some colouring sketches soon
greetings!
rashaverak
#31
okz, i defined some colors of the scene… ill work out the saturation and color balance, but thats the general idea (anyway, i never respect the sketches :P)
as u know, c&c r welcome 
greetings
gmiller8
#32
Holy sht dude,
You have practickly created an entire world. Kinda Dark but really sweet. I am not saying it is un original, nut it reminds me of Warhammer 30000. But only in the religeolse since of with the herding of the races and such. You designs are totally originall. the concepts just reminded me of it. Thanks for the vision. keep it up.
arturro
#33
Nice colors man, but I would advice to reduce the clouds. They are too big and cover too much of the sky. The feeling of division between the foreground and background is disturbed by this. Good luck!
BC1967
#34
GREAT CONCEPT! I loved that book too. And… Rama!
The character sketches are wonderful, weird and beautiful at the same time, very otherworldly. Keep going!
My only suggestion would be to push the camera angle even more. Try taking it down to the walkers, seeing the shepards and the Enity from a POV inside their eyeline.
rashaverak
#36
wow! lots of replies!
gmillereight:i couldn’t finde WH30000 pics :s post a few if u have, plz!
arturro: excellent, when i was making the colour sketch, there was something on the background that was anoying me, but i didnt see what was it! u r right! but i really like big clouds… so, i think im gonna reduce them a bit, and make vertically larger the final image, so ill have space to play with the sky and separate better the fore and the background (maybe i could desaturate a bit the background, or changing its color balance, makin almost an unique tone… ill see) thnx!
BC “mil nueve sesenta y siete” :D: yes, i was thinkin on it, pushing more the angle not only will give me a more detailed view, i think it will bring more power to the scene, but for the colouring sketch i didnt redraw the scene, i used the old sketch and painted on in 
too lazy and short of time
worleyclarence: i didnt understand the question :s
greetings!
rashaverak
#37
okz some modelling of the Pillars… the solid structure is quite simple, so im working out the red clothes, but here is what i got so far
SnakeFarlow
#38
Wow nice concept, When could I see more modelings, I hope that will be soon.
I will keep one eye in your work.
Take a look of my images www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=184160
Snake Farlow. The rogue.
rashaverak
#40
im done jokin
its a 3D sketch of the scene
the sky’ll be higher, ill do it in post, but i dont know if its allowed to do that in this category, ill read the rules
rashaverak
#41
dammnn im too busy , i think im not gonna finish it at time :s
some color test i forgot to submit
blackdragoncg
#43
Hi there! I just want to say i think you are a talented artist! I really like the concept sketches you have done there! some awsome style and imagination there. I wish you luck with your entry.
Kind regards
Gary
My Thread http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=191177&highlight=Gary+Picton
rashaverak
#44
thnx , i really apreciate yr words, man!
im sad, cause i dont think im gonna make it… the same with machineflesh contest 
greetings!
essencedesign
#45
Well a great concept anyways…I would still love to see those walkers modeled out…so weather it’s for the contest or not…get on IT… :argh: