Grand Space Opera 3D Entry: Reda j Al-Yousef

#6

hey friends,
Thanx Jorge and D2
This is my first idea story many thing are in mind but could not bring them together easily I will show you the story and will enhance it day by day with sketches hope itā€™s gonna work:

[color=pink]Standard idea (Story)[/color]

[color=blue][color=palegreen]Here in the death valley a battle of ā€œFreedom Makingā€ was effected the nations gave all generations, [color=palegreen]civilizations, and land as sacrifice for their freedom
foragers from a far distance in the galaxy has been deleted and erased completely from their planet[/color], the planet also been damaged , the land in death valley is full of radian[/color][/color] [color=white][color=palegreen]magnetic and the fighters crafts spread on the places around, planet is not good for living any more, and the small people left their planet and [/color]establish a base on the moon (Oraisa) trying to save what they could.[/color]
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#7

this is the 1st general ideaā€¦

#8

closer view

#9

I prefer the closer view. Can be cool!! :wip:
The bulding on the left, make me think a Playstation2 :wink:

Keep going!

#10

Closer with more buildingsā€¦ looks really interesting !

#11

looks great! prefer the first. Really think the sky adds to it.

#12

ammm , i geuss i will use them both in some how, thank you guys i will show more soon. i was in week end and waited to back here again,percydaman jddog SuperXCM thanx.

#13

the first image have nice composition, if you are planning to combine both i think second one will be in front, show us colored version.

#14

hey buddy good to c ya hereā€¦ nice concept u got thereā€¦ i bet iā€™tt look really awesome in 3dā€¦ i like the lighting feeling u gave to the first drawingā€¦ iā€™m always a fan of sliced lightā€¦ keep it up buddyā€¦ iā€™ll b watching this oneā€¦ :thumbsup: :bounce:

#15

Wow cool concept sketches!

#16

HeyHey,ā€¦
Itā€™s good to see you here, wish you all the best of the bestā€¦ of the best !!!
Good story for a nice picture.

:thumbsup:
David.

#17

Cool drawing man!, I especially like the Blade like structures comming out of the ground. SHould be really cool when your done. :wink:

#18

YO! splotch!

When I saw your sketch and after reading the story, this idea came to my mind:

" on top of the cliff/mountain/thing have a huge multitude looking down to the not forgoten/forgoten battlefield "

:smiley: What you think?

#19

Very cool ideas. I really like the first sketch, very dynamic. Although the detail of the seconed one would be cool in the lower forground.

#20

Hey, Reda!

Just popping in to say that the first sketch looks most promising :thumbsup:

#21

Designer2 you are right bro thanx .

3doidthank you friend for your support that push me to go on,

DJ-Prismatica glad to see you here mate thanx man

Davee HeyHey friend thanx for good wishes happy to see you in my thread friend, happy cuz you like my story.

BookMansBlues thanx friend i will do my best to bring it as good as i ccan

ARAS ā€¦ thats really cool i will keep it in mind thanx friend ā€œnot forgoten/forgoten battlefieldā€

this will be my new poem :stuck_out_tongue:

james thanx man ā€¦glad you pop in here

#22

Hi Splotchā€¦I like the dramatic overall look.Plus the depth within the scene looks nice.Looks quite expansive.I prefer the second sketch.My only suggestion would be to show a little more of the sky in this oneā€¦Raise the ceiling a touch.:wink:

    I think your design/plan is a good one.I wish you alot of luck.:arteest:
#23

Awesome, hope to see some modelin soon! :applause:

#24

Good concepts, and I also prefere the second one. What about a wide angle shot os perhaps a semi panorana to get more scale?

#25

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