Grand Space Opera 3D Entry: piotrek marczak

#21

Your work really looks great! Good luck!
Jorge

#22

The model looks great, I love the style. The pose with the ships behind them reminds me of an action figure commercial. I love it.

Good luck!

-Bret

#23

Cool character, the shaders and lighting add SO much to the image. Can’t wait to see the rest.

#24

Looks cool,and quickly done.:thumbsup:

#25

Haven’t done much since last update, I’ve modelled few heads and painted simple textures.
Foreground will consist of 4-5 people. No guns, no armor or other military stuff.

As you can see there is alot to do, especialy with neck and hand anatomy.But this can wait, now I want to start modelling what’s in background: spaceships.

I am thinking also about giant flying platform in the centre of camera, something like cylindrical-shaped space parking lot.

#26

Yeah, man, yeah! That looks sooooo epic. Great camera angle.

The three men look a little stiff, like they have boards going up their backs. The female looks natural. Maybe play with the shoulder to hip angles a little. Try to show where their weight is, maybe exxagerate it a bit.

The man putting his hand on the woman’s shoulder is great and the woman’s hands look good. The guy with the clenched fist looks like a little tough guy, he has some character. I don’t know what the deal is with the guy next to him. I do think you did a good thing making him doing something different than the others, but maybe something even more different would be good. Folded arms, arms behind his back or maybe clasping one hand with the other in front.

Anyway, sorry to try and make you work on these guys when you are anxious to get to the space ship models. :slight_smile:

bear in mind that I really love this, overall. My crits seem bigger than my praise, but actually they are not.

-Bret

#27

Its ok, Thanks for constructive crits ! I’m sure it will help me in creating better final image.

#28

Goooood! :thumbsup:

Those characters are really nice! Keep going!

#29

Very good quality. I like it a lot and please forgive me but this image is just asking for it.

BIll: “Johnny, I think this is where we will start a new life, a new city, and most of all, our annual BBQ, great job on the landing pilot.”

Johnny: “Bill, you call that a landing? Felt more like a crash to me.”

Bill: “you are mistaken it was a landing”

Feel free to add to this. I love the design! :slight_smile:

#30

Wow that looks great and so real :applause:
Can`t wait to see all the environment and vehicles aroud :bounce:

Powodzenia!!

#31

Thanks guys!

Airborn- Girl: “Shut up you two and call a taxi” :wink:

OT: If you like the idea of colonizing other plantes I recommend you book by Orson S. Card “Lovelock”. I’ve just finished reading it and it’s in my top 10 fav sci-fi books.

#32

Cool characters. Cant wait to see some spaceships!:thumbsup:

#33

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