Thank you guys for your opinions!!
I think that you’re right, the second ship needs to be tweaked. The problem, in my opinion it’s not the motor part in propotion to the body, but the juction between them.
As for the story behinde all my idea, forgive me for not have posted that, because to be honest…i forgot heh heh!! So here it is:
This is a colonie that were built by a man, the mastermind of a project called UTOPIA, that was a part of a emergency plan for a planet called Valk, that was having real problems with polution.
No ones wanted to take part in the construction of UTOPIA, becasue it was a too risky plan. It was to expansive and the target planet for it was too dry to construct a city and others behinde it.
This man, Orn Gara, had to arranje support between the rich people, to find money to support it’s construction, and between the operary class, to obtain the right force for buit it.
Well his plan started with no government support, and he moved to the Nospyt planet to start the construction.
UTOPIA was finaly built, he was preparing the a big party to celebrate the realization of dream, he even would invite all the gorvenment guys that didn’t support his idea, to demonstrate that it works and another colonies could be built, to save the Valk people from beeing extinct.
while Orn was making the preparations, Valk starts to get its temperature higher until it exploded and all the people in there died!!
So UTOPIA is the Valk people last redut and the genesis of a new civilization that embraces The Nature as it should be.
That is why, UTOPIA is a city that is in a desert but it’s starting to bring life to it among with water.
I hope you liked the story behind my concept!!