hey there, composition looks good so far, I can’t really telll what is in the far bg, assuming that the buildings are close, I would shorten the buildings on the left to emphasize and bring out the head of the ship. Then I would flip the bottom half so that the artifact is on the left side, this balances out with the ship. Now it looks like a lot is happening on the right, the ship and artifact is there. My 2 cent’s worth 
Looking forward to more stuff. Cheers!
hey ROGER awesome concept drawing my freind… i can c ur really good with lighting…i liked the setting… i’ll b watching this thread for updates… keep it up 
Great Lighting work! This is also very unique. It would be cool to see a few stars but I understand you are just getting a feel for lighting and such.
Great Job! 
-Dean
Very nice visuals! - you have a strong colour pallette there - reminds me a little of Tim Hildebrandts strong cool/warm contrast! - looking forward very much to your progress!!!
Hello,
After reading the comments from all the other people I had to check out your site, VERY Impressive work. Looks like you’re going to be a tough challenger, I welcome the oppurtunity to compete with you. Like the sketch too. good luck
peace
Wow!! what a nice colouring … Are you going to work more on this concept? If yes, you should post ir in the 2D section …I’ll see your work.
yep just like everyone else im also a fan but i am yet to finish the joa tutorial
you are of to a good start and i am excited to see what you can come up with
good luck for the challenge
Michel, don’t ask me why… your image remind me a little bit Balck&Mortimer… I suppose was the 'le secret de L’espadon" (not sure). Really like it and the amient lighing promise a excellent work !
jdd
Ducklips : Thx, yes of course I will add some stars in the sky but like you say,
just a fast rough lighting and research
Kromekat : I know T.Hildebrandts’s works, a great illustrator, here the colors
are very roughes, I’ll make lot of tweak with work progress.
HieSpike : Thx very much I see you website too and I like your NASA’s works
I’ll follow your thread too.
Emonimo : I’ll make some tweak with lot of details or concepts, like spaceship in the sky (differents designs), placement of the people and artifact etc.
I make a advanced version of this rough this week end I’ll hope but only in 3D section.
dark-elf2, Plaute, Luciano berutti and BookMansBLues : Thanks a lot for your comments
Jddog : I don’t know very well this comic but I remember now the colors etc,
btw it’s a all time classic european’s comic
I was missing it!! The master teacher of poly / girl modeling is here!! :bowdown:
I cant thank you enough for your tutorials!! I love your works and it couldnt be different with this one. The concept is great, the lighting setup is superb.
I will be watching close for this masterpiece!! :arteest: 
Black&Mortimer…Tonnere de Brest* c’est à lire ! Par milles sabord* ! Astronaute d’eau douce…*
(* citation capitaine haddock)
Like capitaine haddock nobody can found so strange words or description haha lol + 
Just I jocke.
jdd
Hi Michel, as everything so simple and easy
sells yours I begin of work in the contest…
great luck for the master
ooh that looks real sweet ^^
gives a kind of ‘grim’ atmosphere, this could definetely go up the coolness-lane 
Fahrija : Cool I’ll make some retake with the view, adding some space above and under, to resize the picture like the first post ratio.
So I can modify the character’s ground (adding some platforms and mecanicals) and the sky.
'hope it’s work.
Tranchefeux : thanx, i’ll try to do my best.
