The atmosphere is great! I like this light halo and lence flare you created.
But I’ve also got something to critic: The terrain looks kind of tiny to me, but I’m sure that’ll change as soon as you start putting in characters and vehicles and so on.
Good luck!
thanks for the crit, now that you mention it does look a bit on the small side, will see what I can do to fix it.
mark
That’s exactly what I felt when I saw the picture : this looks great but it gives me the feeling of looking at a close up of a sand ground with some little stone here and there. You should try to change the grain of the sand, to make it almost invisible, and add details on the rock textures so that we can think those are much larger pieces.
I will basing my main character off one of my old sketchs, more to come as soon as I get my scanner to work.
later
Mark
Hey Wow that is looking good there Dae! Get your scanner working ha ha! Will be keeping an eye on ya.
Cheers
Great start, try to post a few more concepts, I cant really see where your going at the moment.
Keep it up!
sorry about the lack of updates, a fellow worker has gone to Egypt for a vacation, so I have been too busy doin her workload and mine and during that time all I can think about is this challenge and how much has to be done, damn I wish I didn’t have to work and I free to hone my Maya skills.
Will be back soon (most likey end of the week)
Dae
Looking good! very realistic screen. Just one thought: perhaps the scene of the sun behind the planet with a lens flare is a little too used… Maybe you would like to try another angle. Some concept art of the final scene will also work. Anyway, its a great work! I will be cheking your thread!
