Grand Space Opera 3D Entry: Mark Vorster

#6

RobertJ you are right , endeed it looks like a diorama . well done dae.
The atmosfere is awsome. keep on going

#7

thanks guys,

Mark :slight_smile:

#8

The atmosphere is great! I like this light halo and lence flare you created.

But I’ve also got something to critic: The terrain looks kind of tiny to me, but I’m sure that’ll change as soon as you start putting in characters and vehicles and so on.
Good luck!

#9

thanks for the crit, now that you mention it does look a bit on the small side, will see what I can do to fix it.

mark

#10

That’s exactly what I felt when I saw the picture : this looks great but it gives me the feeling of looking at a close up of a sand ground with some little stone here and there. You should try to change the grain of the sand, to make it almost invisible, and add details on the rock textures so that we can think those are much larger pieces.

#11

I will basing my main character off one of my old sketchs, more to come as soon as I get my scanner to work.
later

Mark

#12

Hey Wow that is looking good there Dae! Get your scanner working ha ha! Will be keeping an eye on ya.
Cheers

#13

Your view of the terrain is so realistic! Can’t wait to see how it evolves.

#14

Hey Dae!! C’mon buddy! Show us your awesome modling skills!!!

#15

Great start, try to post a few more concepts, I cant really see where your going at the moment.

Keep it up!

#16

sorry about the lack of updates, a fellow worker has gone to Egypt for a vacation, so I have been too busy doin her workload and mine and during that time all I can think about is this challenge and how much has to be done, damn I wish I didn’t have to work and I free to hone my Maya skills.

Will be back soon (most likey end of the week)

Dae

#17

Just started, trying to get the shape to work.

Dae

#18

adding a bit more detail, also added started modelling a head.

mark

#19

I did a double post

#20

just started the body.

Dae

#21

Looking good! very realistic screen. Just one thought: perhaps the scene of the sun behind the planet with a lens flare is a little too used… Maybe you would like to try another angle. Some concept art of the final scene will also work. Anyway, its a great work! I will be cheking your thread!

#22

chest and back almost done then onto the arms

#23

here is a view of the back

and one from the front

Dae

#24

pretty much finished the arms.

Mark

#25

the back

a wire

Good night

Mark