Grand Space Opera 3D Entry: Julien Daulte


#241

Hi,

thats looking absolut great, very nice Image and Scene!!
I think it´s a little bit dark maybe… but in this way it becomes more atmosphere.

How about to increase the light from the fire a bit in the front of the image, so that some near objekts, maybe the small building on the right is a bit lighten up and colored in red? Just a thought.

But don´t let you irritat! Your work is grand & i love it
100% Vote by me :wink:

See U


#242

Hi Alexander… thanks o much for your comments yep I think that is a things to do. :bounce: Really appreciated !
About darkness… I work using a mac so all looks fine for me. But I suppose that for Windows user the image is really darker als I can show… Any comment about darkness or loosless of some details are really wellcome.

got to work :wip:

jdd


#243

Hi Julien…well looks like you have gone full circle.Great to see you have achieved a finished idea,and done it quite nicely.Congrats to you…:thumbsup:

My only siggestion for that last touch would be to give the lower portions a touch more light…As for the sky I think you have achieved your perfect light source…

See you again when you show us the final…very nice effort and great to see you have finished (Almost :slight_smile: ) something more than 2000 people set out to do but could not…Best to you and good luck…:arteest: :beer:


#244

thanks for comment and support Michael! …ok I take notice at this point… :thumbsup:

jdd


#245

And here finally the grass is added…
Actually I didn’t change any levels or contrast on the image. Now that I have the grass I will work on the enlightment of the building and adding some lights efx…

any comment is really wellcome :wink:

jdd


#246

Could you please make a ship be landing close to you in the foreground over the blank area between the building and the camera with some cool lighting effects… I know may be to much to late, but I just couldn’t help but wanting to bring the ships closer to look at them… Keep it up man, good job so far!


#247

I think too that a big thing at the foreground will be better in your compo… a ship or another thing… that add more depth to your picture… quick man… the end is near now :thumbsup:


#248

Here different small things were corrected and I added some burned area on the right building…


#249

Here the layer with the one I enanche my fire lighting fx


#250

With this layer I add some small movement blur efx


#251

And here all layer together… now I will see this last post on different computers to now if is enough contrasted and if all works…

I had to finish today… no more time for me, sorry Lemog and ||) |V| |^|… is to late for me :frowning: … next challenge…

Any commen about all lights, contrast or major mistakes,etc… are wellcome… today (in the nex 6 hrs… I will post my final image… so… here we are gs…

many thanks for every support…

jdd


#252

And here othe minor corrections…
click on image to view it bigger

jdd


#253

Ok I decided to cut off the low corner on the right and put on it grass too… the way how look out before don’t convince me…

Except some level modification I think this is really the final one…

click on image to view it bigger

jdd


#254

Here I finished my first adventure on a CGTalk contest…

No particular order of apparence…
just you encourage me and give me a support
thank you so much

Ric_535
kromekat, the super moderator :wink:
miketche
splotch
Krulwick
Designer
Panupat
drdespair
Linda… the wonderful queen :wink: … (ficolo don’t touch ! haha)
superlayer
EvilE
markovicd
Eclisod
HieSpike
Franky
BookmansBlues
percydaman
Gluteus Maximus
gpepper
cg219
Borro
simoncvy
Therion
Kaksht
oblivionblack
madshooter
najib
nataz
wollyka
texxx
uwil
johnny3d
essencedesign
SuperXCM
overcontrast
AcidX
Lelantos
Kragh
ace4016
Erik Heyninck
theuni
arturro


Tranchefeux
MDN67
vampet

Richard… ||) |V| |^| good luck on your incredible adventure !!! Hurry up to finish your work !

Dimiris… DimitrisLiatsos haha… lord of bubbles

soapy… thanks for your visit !

Peter… Peter C. :thumbsup: hope you can reach the end of you amazing work !

Jorge… rattlesnake thanks so much for support !!!

Laurent… Lemog… il faut s’organiser un bouffe…

Michael… Virtuoso, your kindness and support was/is really appreciated… mostly all ‘meeting’ are absolutely virtual… anyway… thanks for all your precisu comments

Anders… Cartesius :beer: thanks so much, sad that this time you wasn’t in this “party”… for a next time !!! Now if I can (need to find time) we see us in the medieval airport challenge at renderosity !!!

Brian… FlyingP … whre are you flying actually …?

James… JamesMK the notro wabbit… & the great bands of fluffians…

at a next adventure !!!

Peace, love & Save the planet !!!

Julien aka jddog


#255

home, at least it’s in the works :wip:

congrats on the final image too mate :smiley:


#256

haha not so far away :smiley: … many thanks for all the support !!!

jdd


#257

actually it’s the other side of the world, and you are more than welcome, sorry I didn’t poke my head in more :slight_smile:


#258

Hey Julien… your pic comes really better… one remark… don’t forget to lightened the inside part of the flying left ship… inside parts of it are certainly iluminated by the fire… and like that… certainly better to see well this dark ship in front of this dark building, no ? and for the “bouffe”… no soucy :thumbsup: Champagne !


#259

Wohoo, it’s done, wohoo!!!

Congratulations Julien! 

And as always, --> :beer: and :thumbsup:

I hope so as I would love to see what you can come up with :slight_smile:

/Anders


#260

:rolleyes: …oups you’re right… but sadly my time for this contest is finished. I had so many works to do (and I’m really late with some one) that te time for me is ended… eventually for a future post all your comment will be enter in a next version of this work…

haha :bounce: (le bonce di tout…)

merci Laurent :thumbsup:

jdd