Grand Space Opera 3D Entry: Jorge Lescale Muciño

#361

hi…this is my rendering for the warriors…!! soon ill be working on the compositing!!..wooo

#362

maybe you can more indirect lightning, to have more natural feeling of the lightning. And the skin shader looks to have some kind of sheer highlights, its not great, and its overexposed on the sunny side of the face…

#363

Fabulous work. This is going to be a great image. IMHO, I wouldn’t mind seeing the group of figures being a little a little more from the front, but i think you’ve already rendered. It could be adjusted in post. Also, tiny thing, but it caught my eye that the two banners are identical, right down to the tears in the cloth–again easy to fix in post. Keep going, the end is in sight. :thumbsup:

#364

excelent work, definitively, the last view with the characters close it is much better, i agree with artemesia66 this part of the cloth, in the front character i think is a little unrealistic, if you have render the image try, to make a render of this sector only, or like artemesia66 says It could be adjusted in post. good work, and good luck!!:thumbsup:

#365

you got it right on your second test…i just meant bring the camera closer giving less space to fill…you got it though …keep renderin

#366

thanx a lot for advice !!

will fix those details in post…time is almost over…but really thanx for finding this errors…ill do my best…:slight_smile:

#367

Hello mate! Nice going with the elements here! :thumbsup:
The poses are great…
IMHO…I think you should tone down a bit the purple-red lights on those guys…

Keep them coming!! :bounce:

#368

temple rendering…
tic toc tic toc

#369

step one eh…these waiting hours are hard on the heart,urgg…Love the use of red huges in the bounce lighting…keep "m comming…you know I’m a fan…

#370

[QUOTE=rattlesnake
temple rendering…
tic toc tic toc[/QUOTE]

yeah… tic toc tic toc… for me too… your work rocks really !!! :applause:

jdd

#371

Snake my man…where did these renders come from…should have told me…looking very sharp.It’s great to see the hard work and effort pay off so well.Those little things like perfect grip on the bows,and delicate painted textured,and a whole “Live” scene come together…Looking excellent Jorge…get her done with that Jorge touch…:arteest: :arteest:

#372

this is the sky im painting for the composition…i had paint this almost at the begining of the challenge…but it will be used now…

#373

my compo…
im going to change a few things for the final…but this looks near final…

#374

• 4 thumbsup for you Rattlesnake, YOU DID IT :bounce:

#375

Yeah… just one remark… all parts are with orange mood… but the temple is more pink than the rest… I f think you must adjust that…

And after that… I decern you 5 :thumbsup:

:smiley:

#376

Yup …also …just soften a bit the Sky behind …it attracts the eye too much i think…just a humble thought to a great work… GOOOOOOO SSSSSSSSNAKE …and the crowd goes wild…

OLE …OLE… OLE…:bounce:

#377

I can’t say anything…~so beautiful ~maybe i should practis for another century (^_^only a joke )

#378

Amazing my friend. THis sky is just beautiful, and acts wonderful with your scene.

#379

Hi Jorge…Well i can say that the sky has a “true” artists touch…A magnificent blend of vivid and intense colors…swirling with life and depth…The colors are perfect for your scene/setting.And bring out the entire package perfectly…A masterful touch on the sky,and a perfect fit for the compo,the balance of tones from models to sky are spot on…:buttrock:

The near final compo has turned out great,just a wonderful combined scene full of a heavy workload,lots,and lots of wonderful creations,You have mixed your compo very well,and given a great result of a fierce space opera…I think also that when seen at major rez this is one of those Pictures that will soar very high,and do it even more justice…

I’ll be watching for that final Jorge,and just wish you the very best with your last touches…One of my favorites for sure,and it’s even better that it comes from a “true” friend…And a great guy…You have put together a wonderful package,But I knew you would…See you soon Jorge…:buttrock: :buttrock:…and those beer’s are Tequilla…With or without worms…you choose…:wink: …:beer:

#380

Nice rendering you got there Jorge. It must have been tough painting a sky at such high resolutions. Can’t wait to see the final.