Grand Space Opera 3D Entry: Jesse Mead

#8

azhhael: I have two more ideas I want to consider, then I’m going to commit, so none of these yet are final.

I do currently like the third image best for the 2D entry, but it perhaps needs a little more going on, or a different composition of the fleet. The first sketch would be my current choice for 3D, but perhaps viewed out of a dramatically lit hangar bay with a lone pilot holding his flight helmet silhouetted against the backdrop.

I have 2 days off work now, so maybe I can think of something better or more dynamic. Thanks for the input, guys.

#9

the last two both have a very unique colour scheme and feel to them.
alltho the second one is a bit more threatening imo, while the third one is more peaceful atm.
probably a matter of which theme you want to express.

a lot of potential in all of them, so I guess you can’t go wrong:)

best of luck to you :thumbsup:

#10

It was a pleasure looking at your concepts. Good use of color. When we consider the story impact of each one, I would like to suggest that you do your final on the “space nomad” scene.
It has the most impact of the three. Looking forward to seeing which one you decide.

-DM

#11

Going to go with the nomads at Colossus idea. A couple of different ways I could work this though…

#12

This one is a little less detached, but also less epic feeling.

#13

I agree, last one is less epic. If you try to combine last two posted pix, maybe it fits together to display epic and personal angle of scene at the same time. I mean these two characters and ground and branches to foreground and ships with ring and space backround. Maybe it’s worth to try.
But my personal choice is first and third pictures, especially third has EPIC feelings, these structures behind planet are great.
Anyway, good luck.

#14

I like the idea, the concept sketches are great - I prefer the one with figures, though it is true it is less epic. I think seeing through and seeing what’s beyond the gate works really well - to make more epic could try different positions for figures (eg bottom right) with nomad ships from top left (large) to centre (small) :slight_smile:

#15

Beautiful sketches. The last one is the more emotive, intimistic. I loved it.

Stefano

#16

Your sketches are fantastic. Looking forward to more from you. I like the color schemes as well. good luck

#17

Very good Concepts

#18

Trying something different. I want to stay away from vast space armadas. I want to be able to tell a story, but remain sort of vague so the viewer’s imagination can do the rest.

I like this, but it could use something going on in the foreground. Two kids playing indictaes a sense of ease about the caravan’s destination, a pregnant woman indicates hope, etc. Still seems a bit shallow…

Feedback is much appreciated.

#19

Since most of the characters will only be visible from the back, I can simply use this multiple times with slight variations.

It’s a start…

#20

> I like this, but it could use something going on in the foreground. Two kids playing indictaes a sense of ease about the caravan’s destination, a pregnant woman indicates hope, etc. Still seems a bit shallow…

Maybe some very faint alien ruins or the bones of a wrecked spaceship?

I’m glad to see something other than a Space Armada, but possibly you need more flashiness to get that Space Opera feel. Perhaps some nonhumans along as native guides? First contact with the locals?

What are the blue cones on the horizon going to end up as? Cloud formations? Distant orbital cities - they might serve to provide contrast with the foreground elements.

#21

The idea is that there are huge motherships on the horizon, extending into the atmosphere, and various caravans visible from this hilltop making their way towards the ships.

#22

> The idea is that there are huge motherships on the horizon, extending into the atmosphere, and various caravans visible from this hilltop making their way towards the ships.

Excellent - I’d hoped it’d be something like that. Makes a good contrast with the realtively low tech caravan.

#23

I need to stop obsessing about the concept. Regardless, I like this most of all. It has somewhat of a fantasy aspect. The translucent bubbles would actually be mostly clear, and sort of iridescent.

#24

your coloring in your latest sketch is great , look very fantasy! but the ring on the left is a little bit strange , it’s seem it in the wrong place??
good luck man!!

#25

Yeah, I’m going to play with the positioning once I get everything together. Perhaps I can find a better composition.

#26

Bubble transport modelling so far.

#27

Nice Holder;)
:thumbsup:
Sketches are cool looking forward to see more 3d model of it