Grand Space Opera 3D Entry: Janet Taylor

#21

Hi Janet,

I like the way this is going - to have a baby in focus and show the emotions of the people instead of the fighting can come out really strong. Great concept and composition - good luck!:thumbsup:

#22

Started with the Inheritor, since heā€™s the focus of the compo. C&C would be extremely welcome.

#23

Hi Janetā€¦Well the Inheritor loks to be quite the smooth mesh,nice and clean,interesting facial featuresā€¦I think a very nice jobā€¦Your doing quite an overall nice job here on all stages thus farā€¦itā€™s texture time,the Inheritor is ready to goā€¦:slight_smile: :thumbsup:

#24

Character Design for the Princess. Didnā€™t spend alot of time detailing the front, since I donā€™t think it will be visible anyway.

#25

hi Janetā€¦
nice story and good concept ! :thumbsup:
i like inheritorā€¦ very expressive!
untill later and best of luck!
cheersā€¦

#26

hey guys, thanks for the encouragement. Iā€™ve noticed that the outside of the Inheritors eyes is a bit pinched, and Iā€™ve fixed that, but now itā€™s on to the princessā€¦

#27

Loved your story :thumbsup: Head of the baby is very good and clean
More of this i want :bounce: great job keep it up.

#28

Great story and strong composition; your modeling is comming along great! Regarding the composition, what about if the baby exchange thing happens at the top of a tower, from this point you will be able to add lot more detail, and will keep the baby from mixing with the BG.

-cheers!

#29

thanks for you support, Lelantos and ARSA.

@ARSA: interesting idea. I definitely need to tighten up the compo, and iā€™ll give your idea a look when i do.

#30

Iā€™d like to see more pencil sketches from you, I like it very, very good!

#31

The inheritor is a great model, perfectly cleanā€¦ I actually did try to come up with some crits, but there really is nothing to complain aboutā€¦ Interesting concept going here, so just keep doing it.

#32

Heā€™s really looking great! Keep it up and hope to see some updates soon :thumbsup:

#33

Princess Ardra. As far as Iknow right now, sheā€™ll only be seen from the back, but in case the compo changes later, I put some detail in the front. Plus it was good practice ; ). C+C very welcome.

#34

Thanks everyone for dropping by. I look forward to comments on the Princess.

Penumbra: now that Iā€™ve finished this pass at the princess (before I get C+C), Iā€™ll be putting up some more pencil drawings of the rescuer and the ships. Hopefully tomorrow.

#35

Hello janet , just passing by and watching your last updates , you are doing a nice job here .

the cape looks very nice with nice details in it .

I think that the boobs need some tweaks maybe more rounded but is up to you girl. You can adjust the vertex in the neck too , it seems a little large for the proportions of your model .

Of course , this is a personal taste in your model . Let see more updates

Keep the good work:thumbsup:

#36

WOWā€¦ :eek:
what a great model this princess!!
very nice model! veri nice! :thumbsup:
very impressive! i always envy to good character modelersā€¦ :smiley:
the best of luck and cheersā€¦

#37

thats a very nice modeling work girl!
u did a great work in all little details and i like it!!!..shes much beautiful in 3d than sketchesā€¦youre doing a nice entry:thumbsup:

#38

your latest update is stunning! great detail modeling ! canā€™t wait for you to put it all together!

#39

Indeed ā€¦how did i miss thisā€¦very good ā€¦waiting for more now that i found your threadā€¦forgive meā€¦too many threadsā€¦ :slight_smile:

#40

yep good character modelingā€¦ looks very fantasy oriented ā€¦ great skills there