Ichim Andrei has entered the Grand Space Opera 3D.
Two homeworlds, both alike in dignity,
In fair Verona Galaxy, where we lay our scene,
From ancient grudge break to new mutiny,
Where cyborg blood makes cyborg hands unclean.
From forth the fatal loins of these two foes
A pair of star-cross’d lovers take their life;
Whole misadventured piteous overthrows
Do with their death bury their parents’ strife.
The fearful passage of their death-mark’d love,
And the continuance of their parents’ rage,
Which, but their children’s end, nought could remove,
Is now the three months’ traffic of our stage;
The which if you with patient ears attend,
What here shall miss, our toil shall strive to mend.
I think I should explain a few things about what I’m going to do here. The action takes place in Verona Galaxy. As a result of the collision between a planet and an asteroid many pices were spred into space but two massiv blocks maneged to remain on their orbit, revolving around each other and around their sun. With the asteriod came not only distruction but life too. A life form that travelled many light-years through space with this asteriod found on both these blocks the perfect conditions to evolve. Three houndred years ago the need for resources made the two planets turn on each other. During this battle the story of the two lovers begins.
Wellcome and good luck!!
t forget to put a link to your Space Opera WIP in your signature. Its easier for the others to follow your thread.
Andrei, nice lyrics.
Even I was forced to ask for help my good friend, the dictionary, I still could taste the flavor in your rhymes.
I must confess that all english lyrics sound to me like being Shakespeare
s lyrics. Nice. Considering its about a love story in war times, this was a good start.
Good luck in your attempt to put this on 3d.
I really like the concept… it’s cool!
Keep going and good luck!!! :buttrock:
A cyborg Romeo and Juliett, can’t go wrong there!
This one could be really great Good luck.
It is the East, and Juliet is the sun!
Arise, fair sun, and kill the envious moon,
Who is already sick and pale with grief
That thou her maid art far more fair than she.
Be not her maid, since she is envious.
Her vestal livery is but sick and green,
And none but fools do wear it.
nice story keeep on going
I can wait to see you modeling
andrei313, Great concept I look forward in seeing how you represent the two waring ‘families’, what designs you use for each etc.
I’d personally like to see the overall concept for the scene evolve a little more too. At the moment I find it difficult to see any conflict.
'Tis but thy name that is my enemy.
Thou are thyself, though not a Montague.
It is not hand nor wire
Nor arm nor tubes nor any other part
Belonging to a cyborg.
O, be some other name!
What’s in a name?
That which we call a rose
By any other word would smell as sweet.
So Romeo would, were he not Romeo called,
Retain that dear perfection which he owes
Without that title. Romeo, doff thy name,
And for thy name, which is no part of thee,
Take all myself.
very unique keep it up
Very cool idea, remake shakespeare for the robot generation…
Cool designs too, really liking Juliet’s wings and (lack of?) arms, very nice indeed.
There is no Univers without Verona suns,
But purgatory, torture, hell itself.
Hence-banished is banish’d from the world,
And world’s exile is death: then banished,
Is death mis-term’d: calling death banishment,
Thou cutt’st my head off with a golden axe,
And smilest upon the stroke that murders me.
I like the idea you’ve got here. It looks like you’ll do it justice
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