itchybob … basicly u right . but u will see the face as reflection in the window.
so i still need to model the face … :shrug:
Grand Space Opera 3D Entry: haim ifrah
painkiller
#21
kirpre
#22
I like the look of the ship (shape-wise), but the texturing just looks tiled. Also, in the original concept drawing the head of the guy seems to dominate the scene a little too much IMO. Nice start.
painkiller
#23
still working on the head …
need to fix alot of thing , i know.
but still it’s a progess .
painkiller
#24
thanks kirpre … about the head in the concept art .it’s big ,i know
but the concept art is just for showing the idea. in fact , i stil not sure whare i will
put every thing …
about the space ships , they look fine but i mey raplace them to somthing less “starwar” type
and more ,let’s say “babylon 5” style …
itchybob
#25
Cool well if you need a reflection I guess its practical
I will also give a nice window effect
I have just a few negative thing to say, ur ears are not pretty the skin is like all stretched. He also looks very cg, I think you need to emphasize the nose a little and also work on the eye lids but as you said the will only be in the reflection so dont get 2 carried away with that. The brow could also use a little work and so couls the corners of the lips. Its very nise though and the things I’ve mentioned are not major things (as in the shouldn’t take long to fix)
painkiller
#26
thanks itchybob ! as i said :still alot of work to do …
but now i have a problem, i’am thinking of taking the scene outside the shuttle.
so u will see the astrunaut floatting in space ,connected to the shuttle and
in the background the alien space ship and earth …
it’s will not damage the story but make it more easier to understand.
what do u think ?
(i will try to add now concept art soon ) :shrug:
young_927
#27
hey painkiller~ nice head model~
how about addin some kind of helmet or something to give a more futurist look?
painkiller
#28
thanks young_927…
if i will go for my new idea , i will model complete space suit , include helmet …
it will not be very futuristic style becouse the scene is not in the far future .
RhyderKey
#29
I was looking up some NASA spaceship images when i came across these image’s, ur concept came to mind, i hope they help. Also i think u sould and some more details to ur window.
painkiller
#30
thanks alot RhyderKey !
from the start i know that NASA web site will be good reference source , so
i download some images … this is one of them …
greentek
#31
hi Haim…
your idea is really epic and pivotal… and scarry 
but i dont think that this concept is able to reflect it properly… you simply won’t have enough space to show all the drama is happening through the small spacecraft window… maybe you need to rethink it somehow… just suggestion…
astronauts head model looks very well for me anyway… 
keep cool work up!!!
cheers and best of luck!!! 
d-tox
#32
The head looks good man, perhaps you could define the mound a lil bit more…
But looks good, keep it up!
high
#33
Nice that you have posted those NASA photos. Your work is realy nice, but why don’t you put the acction in the first person? Just another perspective:)
itchybob
#34
I think the second Idea is alot more interesting you could also think of doing something along the lines of the alien ships attacking earth or possibly where he is floating in space with his life line (oxygen hose) Is snapped
But you must persue whatever you are comfortable with
painkiller
#35
thanks guy !
itchybob , i decided to go for my seconed idea, already started to model the astrunaut body …
looks very strange for now so i will post it later …
high - are u suggest that i will put the shuttle window and the head just as a reflection ?
(without realy see the head …) it’s mey work , thanks ,i sould try it .
and d-tox … as reflection or inside the astrunaut suit, any way the head will not be seen
very good … i just need a head .
greentek - i think that high’s idea (or my second idea) solve the problem that u mention, thanks.
more post soon …
