Yo! nice face you got going on there 
There isnt much I can say about it though… Looks good so far :d Keep up the good work
Grand Space Opera 3D Entry: Gavin Goulden
ARSA
#64
stevetwist
#65
A very economical way of working - good stuff. Great to see you’re not modelling stuff you don’t need to.
I look forward to seeing the progress.
teyekanik
#66
looks pretty good… I like the eye detail and the intent expression… the cheek seems out way too far… it should be an almost equal protrusion to that of the brow line. And I know the nose will be covered but right now it’s a little small for the face. Unfortunately I know more about human anatomy and drawing correct proportions than I do about 3D so it’s all I can critique 
good job…
GavinG
#67
ARSA: Thanks dude!
stevetwist: Thanks! I’ll be modeling the rough outline of his jaw because i think it may be needed, I’m just not going to worry about a mouth and it’s topology.
teyekanik: Awesome. Thank you for a very thoughtful critique. I’ll definetly make those changes next time I work on this bad boy (should be tonight…SHOULD be)
-Gav
ARSA
#68
Yo! Gavin_G are you using poly or NURBS to model? just curious cuz its really clean! Well done and it doesnt look heavy!
GavinG
#69
Yo ARSA!
I’m using polygons, using the poly-by-poly method :love:
I’m really hoping i get to model a bit more either today or tomorrow (lousy work…cramping my style.)
Thanks!
Gav
ARSA
#70
Sweet! Poly-by-poly… :bounce:
I’ll be looking forward to see some more of your stuff
-cheers!
GavinG
#72
Face update, brough tthe cheekbones in a bit and enlarged the nose a little…obviously he;s missing a few parts. “Hopefully” I’ll get some time to work on this in the next few days (not sure if i get the holiday or not…heh…heh)
Comments, questions and crits…always welcome!
Gav
ARSA
#73
yo! yo! man, great job with the head looking good… My only siggestion will be re-analyzing the nose… I think is too flat at the bottom (where the nostrils are, nose holes, etc) everything else looks fine to me
-cheers!
stevetwist
#74
Only crit is the nose - it doesn’t taper as it moves up the face (stays the same thickness).
Other than that, it looks very very good. Would be nice to see it without the gap in the middle, I’m sure it’s quick to sort out, and would mean less distractions (which makes it easier to get the overall impression of the face).
Cool work.
GavinG
#75
Thanks boys!
The nose is intentionally flat, mostly because I’ll be covering it with a face mask and just wanted the general shape if I need to do cloth sim
Thnaks again guys, I really appreciate the replies…hopefully i’ll have updates soon (3 day weekend coming up, Wooooo!!)
Gav
HieSpike
#76
Hi,
Nice idea and sketches so far, and I like the laurence of arabia model. Anyway, good luck and cant wait to see more.
peace
dur23
#77
Looks mighty awesome gavin pants. Can’t wait to see those g funk skills finishin this up:)
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