Yo! nice face you got going on there 
There isnt much I can say about it thoughā¦ Looks good so far :d Keep up the good work
Grand Space Opera 3D Entry: Gavin Goulden
ARSA
#64
stevetwist
#65
A very economical way of working - good stuff. Great to see youāre not modelling stuff you donāt need to.
I look forward to seeing the progress.
teyekanik
#66
looks pretty goodā¦ I like the eye detail and the intent expressionā¦ the cheek seems out way too farā¦ it should be an almost equal protrusion to that of the brow line. And I know the nose will be covered but right now itās a little small for the face. Unfortunately I know more about human anatomy and drawing correct proportions than I do about 3D so itās all I can critique 
good jobā¦
GavinG
#67
ARSA: Thanks dude!
stevetwist: Thanks! Iāll be modeling the rough outline of his jaw because i think it may be needed, Iām just not going to worry about a mouth and itās topology.
teyekanik: Awesome. Thank you for a very thoughtful critique. Iāll definetly make those changes next time I work on this bad boy (should be tonightā¦SHOULD be)
-Gav
ARSA
#68
Yo! Gavin_G are you using poly or NURBS to model? just curious cuz its really clean! Well done and it doesnt look heavy!
GavinG
#69
Yo ARSA!
Iām using polygons, using the poly-by-poly method :love:
Iām really hoping i get to model a bit more either today or tomorrow (lousy workā¦cramping my style.)
Thanks!
Gav
ARSA
#70
Sweet! Poly-by-polyā¦ :bounce:
Iāll be looking forward to see some more of your stuff
-cheers!
GavinG
#72
Face update, brough tthe cheekbones in a bit and enlarged the nose a littleā¦obviously he;s missing a few parts. āHopefullyā Iāll get some time to work on this in the next few days (not sure if i get the holiday or notā¦hehā¦heh)
Comments, questions and critsā¦always welcome!
Gav
ARSA
#73
yo! yo! man, great job with the head looking goodā¦ My only siggestion will be re-analyzing the noseā¦ I think is too flat at the bottom (where the nostrils are, nose holes, etc) everything else looks fine to me
-cheers!
stevetwist
#74
Only crit is the nose - it doesnāt taper as it moves up the face (stays the same thickness).
Other than that, it looks very very good. Would be nice to see it without the gap in the middle, Iām sure itās quick to sort out, and would mean less distractions (which makes it easier to get the overall impression of the face).
Cool work.
GavinG
#75
Thanks boys!
The nose is intentionally flat, mostly because Iāll be covering it with a face mask and just wanted the general shape if I need to do cloth sim
Thnaks again guys, I really appreciate the repliesā¦hopefully iāll have updates soon (3 day weekend coming up, Wooooo!!)
Gav
HieSpike
#76
Hi,
Nice idea and sketches so far, and I like the laurence of arabia model. Anyway, good luck and cant wait to see more.
peace
dur23
#77
Looks mighty awesome gavin pants. Canāt wait to see those g funk skills finishin this up:)
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