Grand Space Opera 3D Entry: Dimitris Liatsos

#681

…hmmm…u do have a curly good point there. :slight_smile: :slight_smile: :slight_smile:

@ tuck… :slight_smile:

#682

The composition looks fine to me. A lot of action in different parts of the image. Currently it’s kind of hard tounderstand the dimension 'cause no lighting and halo added (the planet on the top left is really distructing right now but obviously it won’t in the final composition). Nice start on the commander too! :thumbsup:

Keep up the good work
:beer:

#683

…continue on this Ugly Grana guy…

comments and crits always welcomed

#684

Looks like a bad-ass dude, dude! :thumbsup:

Given the low forehead, maybe some more protruded eyebrows to emphasize the primitive warrior look he’s already got :lightbulb

#685

…right on …man u have a sharp eye !:eek: :thumbsup:

#686

I’m waiting :wise:

#687

hello
wuaoumm, great you job, cool starchip

suddenly you are the winner, gives fear

cool byes

good luck

#688

Bigger eyebrows as JamesMK said…better now ?

#689

Right on! Now he only need to frown too… but I assume you’re saving that for the morph targets, right? Right.

EDIT - Oh, it seems he’s got a potato stuck in his ear!

#690

The eyebrows are good, but i think they are beeing kind of dulled out becuase the eye socket seems a bit too big imo. Dont know what this guy is suppose to look like though

#691

…more on him…soon he will move to ZBrush for all the goodies…or maybe first i will make his rest potatotes…err…parts, clothes , helmet…

thanks for commenting guys…

Comments and crits always welcomed.

#692

Nice creature !
The guy doesn’t seems very friendly…maybe because he’s tired of waiting for his nice zbrush make-up.:smiley:
Keep up the good work !

#693

By the way, I’m not sure how he should look but it seems that the top of the head is too flat…

#694

…don’t worry about forehead…he has over…see…

comments and crits are always welcomed…

#695

:eek:

:buttrock: :thumbsup: :applause:

:love:

marry me? :wink:

#696

ahahaha! you really put yourself into the shit! :smiley: all that texturing and hours waiting for renders you have in front of you… poor nut… but if you make it, sure it will be worth it. the scene looks great so far.

about the character.
if I where you I would give him smaller eyes, which would make him look bigger and more powerfull.
also, a little more definition, a few hard edges/straight lines.
and move ears up a little.
here’s a quick little ‘retouch’ I did for you to see these changes and decide by yourself:

it can be personal preference, as with all. and I guess this character will be very small so these changes might not be visible anyways.

:wip:

#697

so i wasnt the only one that thought the eyes were too big, but maybe his eyes are suppose to be that big

#698

Hmm… I actually have to second Fellah’s suggested eye tweak… :thumbsup:

#699

Banana head…thanks …u are right …u see …u are freaking more experienced to this…lol…i will do the tweaks u are suggesting…oh…this Guy will be real close to the camera…and i think pretty big…but in any case i will start adjustments u proposed…thanks man…Ohhh those things on the side of head are not ears…i will so u soon what are they …

wabbit thanks friend…although i am considering sendind more squirrels to your place …nut bubble

ace4016…yup i guess u where right too…i am on to it

assafk …thanks man

#700

I’d make the ‘necklines’ more pronounced, and they look best with quite strong adam’s apple.