Grand Space Opera 3D Entry: Artur Malczyk


#381

Nice job ARSA! You showed more or less what was said before, butgave a next dimension to that. And added those mountains in the backgound… I think that this would make theis picture more real, and would do much for the depth and the composition.

And now get up from this rock on your avatr and get to work easy rider:bounce:


#382

ARSA: Yes, I also like the idea… and will try to realize this part too, but first must do the troops. See you soon mate:thumbsup:

grayspace: thanks for kind words, but there are some mistakes though…

graga: thank you for your interest in my work. I’m finishing the classes now and after doing some everyday stuff, I will work on it!


#383

Thanks for taking a look on my thread, if you want some tips or help, please write.

Thanks
Miguel Salinas

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=178896


#384

This is coming along awesome! Very good suggestions and help ARSA. Yeah, the moon does look a bit odd at the moment, but with the the cracks of light/ explosion ring it will be very obvious that it’s about to explode. I like the idea of having something big going on in the background while also having intense action in the foreground. I think the dust, rocky terrain, villiage, planets, and stars all fit together nicely and I can’t wait to see the people and ships added. For the two planets on the left you might want to change one of them a bit, they look almost the same with a slightly different color. Not reall a big deal, just an idea. And also perhaps some more lights on the buildings, so they don’t blend in too much with the rocks, unless that’s what you’re going for.


#385

darthmikael: well I will ned some opinions wen I make some changes to the environment:)

Sharga: Hi there! thanks for your comment. In fact the two planets on the left side are the same with changed color. Of course I will change one of them. And with the exploding one still have doubts… I will be doing some fx soon for my scene. I mean some missle trails, fire, smoke, exploding missles on the ground, dust from the vehicles, maybe I will learn how to make a nicer explosions. I have some dvd tutorials about particles, so maybe will create some cool effects… Thanks for the comment!


#386

Hi arturro

Some great work here, looking forward to seeing this progress! :slight_smile:


#387

thanks Eagle_e7! progress is being done right now:twisted: But more hours needed…


#388

arturro,

Really like the latest composition/lighting test posted. One small suggestion is add a little haze to simulate even a small amount of atmosphere or dust hanging in the air, blurring the view to space.

Just and idea and keep up the good work.

Cheers

JA


#389

hey Arturro nice updates man I like your environment it’s all in my taste but I’m with jamacsween about adding a little haze in here :slight_smile: nice work I will check for more. ciao :thumbsup:


#390

jamacsween & Divaise! thanks guys! I appreciate your support! I promised to make show the new version today, but it’s impossible… I forgot that previous scene rendered a nice few hours… so I will render it while sleeping, and now will only show the new model and new background… the new composition will come tomorrow.


#391

I promised to show the remodelled terrain… and here it is… in the background blended mountains, which are a copy of the foreground mountains, but each modified with the FDD box. They are not alligned as before, and the distance fog would b eseen better.
The stones nad rocks will be rendered separetly.I will make them tomorrow.


#392

hi Artur…
new terrain looks better i think… great job mate…! :thumbsup:
i may suggest you to make the sky more monotone… cos there was really a lot of different colors in the previous picture…
looks very nice…!
keep great work up and cheers my friend…! :beer:


#393

Wow, That’s improvement! Very cool! :thumbsup:


#394

your avatar look like ben laden , and that’s why i don’t like you?
:twisted::D:banghead: change your avatar please , and i’m sure you understand my feeling…thank’s


#395

greentek: Thanks for the comment man:beer: ! I’m working on the background now. Less amount of colors and more black areas…

GaNNEl: I’m happy that you like it:bounce:


#396

Hi there! I’m sure that greentek doesn’t like ben laden as well. But I agree that the previous version with the white beard and santa’s was better:) Pease!
And now you can tell me what you would change about my scene:bounce:


#397

hi Serge…
over avatar there is an explanation - “…in crisis” :buttrock:
this is the reason why i have it… but if it disturbs you so much i can change it…
but first, please make me sure that you’re not separatist Quebecois… :D:twisted:
but i think you won’t like my original avatar too cos it’s GW Bush… you out there in Montreal doesn’t like him as much as bin laden me thinks… :scream::twisted:
well… crisis is going over so i’ll change it in any case…
the best of luck and cheers… :beer:


#398

This is a cool model. But from the bulk of it I’d say it’s closer to a frigate or a destroyer.
I also agree with some of the other members: too many greebles. It appears as if some sort of parasitic lifeform is attacking it.


#399

Your lazy bear did great job i really like that terain much better :thumbsup:

keep it up mate i will be checking for those rocks mate because you rock :buttrock:


#400

I see that tweaking session worth it’s effort! :thumbsup:

The plane looks larger this way and the distant mounts will serve well their purpose!

Keep tweaking! :bounce: