Grand Space Opera 3D Entry: Alexander Preuss

#41

Really like how the model come out !
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#42

Great, great modeling job. I love your habitat ring as well.

#43

Thank´s for all the great and construktive feedback!

This is realy great!! I´ts my first Contest (on the Alienwarechallenge i ve got zero time, so i missed it :frowning: ) and i´m proud to hear so mush good critique on my work.

I hope this keeps going :slight_smile:

Alex

#44

Because i was working the last week on my Battlecruiser, i decided to put some work on the Habitat ring.

The Image is just a simple creation with 3DS-Max and Photoshop.
I was just playing around a litte.
It´s more like a sketch, but it helps me, to get some ideas for the field of view.

(And for the FUN!!) :slight_smile:

#45

wow, this is great…reminds me of mine lol…but i’ve yet to model anyhting of the ring,

I look forward to seeign how this progresses
Keep us posted!

#46

Wow - I’ve just found this thread.

Awesome concept, great concept art, and the modelling’s coming along too.
Looking damn sweet is all I can say.

Good luck, and I look forward to seeing this develop, cos I recon it’s gonna truley kick some ass.

#47

Very nice Alexander,a overall nice idea.With lots of promise.I will check up on more as you go.But for now,I like your direction and start on the modeling…:arteest:

#48

I’m really liking your craft models, remind me of a strange mix of Minority Report and the suits the bad guys wear on stargate! hmmm, i thought so anyway! :slight_smile:

Keep up the great work, and look forward to seeing more of your modelling!

#49

Wonderful stuff. I love the ring concept and initial views.

#50

hey,

the ring is looking great…wireframe? my only comment is on the scale…if its supposed to have people living in it, it looks small…good luck

#51


Ups! I think my Internetbrowser has it´s own Live :wink:

#52

This is just a lighting and cam. test, to see how the light works, to play a little with the Planet Materials and to adjust the coloring.

hmm… I think there is still al lot of to do :wink:

#53

Looking good so far.

Obviously the ring is far less detailed that your actual model. The planet has a nice colour scheme to it and contrasts nicely with the rest of the scene.

However, I feel the lighting could do with more contrast, or being stronger - as out in space the contrast between light and shadows is very high. Just my opinion.

#54

[QUOTE=stevetwist]…as out in space the contrast between light and shadows is very high… [QUOTE]

Think that real light will render the scene non-attractive because there are basically two colors: very bright white and very dark black. That’s my opinion.

#55

Very nice progress! I really like the layout of the scene and the good concepts! :slight_smile: :applause:

Wish i had some more time on my hands :hmm:

#56

Thanks for the good Critique and Ideas

I think the Coloring needs a lot of work before it´s get to looking great :slight_smile:
I will work on this.

The Ring i replaced only for quicker rendering…

however

here is a wireframe from my aktual Modell. (HieSpike)

#57

That looks great :thumbsup: The habitat ring is coming along nicely. One suggestion maybe the moon could be moved to the right a little because its directly behind the ring…:slight_smile:

#58

good work, specially like the detail of the ring…

keep up:D

#59

hey nice models man… i really likes that ring… nice composition… i like the color there in ur images… keep it up man… ur goin cool :thumbsup:

#60

Hey, good Idea.

I will try out that later, stay tuned :slight_smile: