Grand Space Opera 2D Entry: Vinícius de Sá Menezes

#37

Compositions studies…well. Some feedback its gonna be great in that stage!:wink:

#38

The pivotal moment thingy’s missing, but your style’s great and I’d like to see every one of these finished :smiley:

#39

hello

i believe your very first concept has the most potential for a dramatic image, but unless you find a believable ‘reason’ behind this pan-galactic gang war, you will be missing the pivotal thingy:)

keep to this concept plz,it;s risky but it;s very original

#40

hey guys!

giza-di and coCoKNIght: I know about the pivot thing… my idea is show (in the back of this compositions) the destruction of base (or ship) that represents battle’s end. One of the gang is defeated…(girl’s gang)…what you think?
sorry for poor english

thx a lot guys!

#41

Okey, that sounds cool, but anyway, I’m impatient to see more! :scream:

#42

Yo, I like compostions 1 and 3 really much. I think I might even like 1 better. ANd do the destruction thingy in the bg :stuck_out_tongue: Really, cool concepts. GJ m8, and keep it comming. You still have a lot of time, but get going, we want MORE, MORE i tell ya.

#43

i like your style dude the after the battle concept is classic and very cool. good job on the sketches too youre doin great. the only thing id suggest is alittle more red in the green in the reflectins and sky keep it up ill be watchin

#44

Have to second that!:wip: :wip: :wip:

#45

from your comp study , no, 1,4,5 is my favourite , if you continue with the very fist sketch , I think no 5 is great, just my 2 cents…

#46

Real nice set of sketches - I think I favor 3 and 5. I like the depth of space you get and the swirl of action.

#47

It is so hard to keep up with everyone. this is great stuff. i am really partiasl to gang warfare type stuff. very cool. I prefer comp 3. Lots of depth. did not like the extreme angle before. keep it going. . .

#48

Dudes, great feedback!
Thanks!! I really aprecciate! My favorite is number 3 and 5…but i wanna think in some compositions…well .lets work

thx guys!:thumbsup:

#49

hi great sketches

I like number 3 :thumbsup:

#50

3 or the one you colored, 5 is great but in that sketch she looks like she’s just gonna find another fighter and continue to fight… remember that pivotal thingy? :slight_smile: Battle is lost, the only thing she can do now is enjoy the show and look to the exploding base.

#51

Hi BloodTaster,

great line-drawing thumbnails. Really A pleasure to watch.

I also prefer no.4 and especially no.2 > a fight after a fight. From one action to another.

Greetings
Fahrija

#52

Here some new sketchs… My favorite is the one with face of the girl…maybe i will go on that…

Thank’s again, the feedback is awesome here, I’m doubt about this contest, so your help is great!

#53

All your studies makes me think of more like a storyboard. They are so varied in particular way.

I almost could have sworn youd pick the green crash landing to be the one. Just dont wait for the last week so we get to see finished piece. Month might go fast and youd never notice.

Stay sharp as usual :slight_smile:

#54

the girls face? Is there reflection in her vizor of the rest of the scene . . . that could be quite cool.

#55

Uuuh Bloodtaster, have u given up on this or what? I think so because u have to a LOT of work if u still want to finish this…

#56

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