Vinícius de Sá Menezes has entered the Grand Space Opera 2D.
Latest Update: Concept Sketch: studies again
Here some new sketchs… My favorite is the one with face of the girl…maybe i will go on that…
Thank’s again, the feedback is awesome here, I’m doubt about this contest, so your help is great!
Welcome back mate, i loved your piece in the “Machine Flesh Challenge” i look forward to see what you come up with. Goodluck.
hey guys! nice to see all of you. This challenge will be really awesome!!! Just have SYD MEAD as judge, for me, is the great prize !! (hehehe…,my favorite movie is blade runner)
good luck for you!!!
Welcome to the challenge dude!
Can’t wait what you come up with.
Cheerz and good luck
Tom
Well…finally I post sometinhg. 
The pic will show one pilot defeated by your enemies, he or she crash the spaceship on the “alien swamp”. On the sky, the pilot watch your spaceships fall…that’s all for now!
your first sketch is very exciting. It has alot of vitality; it feels “alive” when i look at it. I hope you can keep this aspect through your progress. I’d say that next you could work more on the ships in the sky and figure out a unique landscape. good job and good luck!
Hey BloodTaster,
nice sketch > I like the thickness of your strokes. The foreground part is really cool. The background is not that convincing but it´s the initial sketch
I will watch your further development with interest.
Greetings
Fahrija
Very nice start! I really like the idea of the swamp, so we wont look just some sky space and desert planet scenes. I dig it!
Nice start, nice idea but maybe you change the landscape.
first: Sombody does also a swamp in the 2D Challenge(What is not a problem)
second: Your image looks right now like a “Luke standing ontop of his crashed X-wing and looking over the swamp”-kind of thing.
Didn’t want to crit so hard but that was the first thing I thought and that gave me the impulse to reply that way.
Anyway love the concept. If you wanna keep the swamp, make it very unique.
Cheerz Buddy:thumbsup:
thx everyone for the replys!!
Tommy: Your opinion make sense man! well, I’ll think in everything you sad.
But…here some ideas i have for this pic:
first: the design of the ships will be very diferent of stars wars, maybe they will look like big “space motorcycles” The idea is " gang wars" hahahah… with a cyberpunk design.
two: the main character will be a girl…
three: it’s more like a alien swamp than a earth swamp…i will try make very unique,( with different creatures and plants)
thx tommy, your critics is always welcome!
Hey! finally I found!
continue the work! the idea this original!
different from the sketches posted in other threads!
good luck!
with the fellow citizen greetings!
more studies of composition, i start to think more cleary about the character design e and “swamp design”…
just an idea… what if u rotate the camera view, that the girl will facing the viewer, so it will be more personal, more dramatic, emotional… she could looking to the sky and her gang and the enemy gang is flying over her, from the back to the front… if i make any sence Just a suggestion for more dramatic feeling in my opinion. The swamp stays in the background, its a great idea of an environmnent.
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