Grand Space Opera 2D Entry: Pawel Lewandowski


#1

Pawel Lewandowski has entered the Grand Space Opera 2D.

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Latest Update: Final Image: finish - closeUP2

My final image.


#2

hey,welcome to the challenge,i wish u the best of luck !


#3

hi all!

one of the first concepts

PS Thanks NOOB!


#4

well hello, i was waiting four you :)… good luck.
first concept is promissing.


#5

good idea - what r u going to use ? photoshop? or just crayons ??


#6

It looks somewhat plain, there’s not much to look at right now but at least it’s easy to see what’s happening in the scene.


#7

Yeah, I think getting one of those ships in the foreground more, or skewing the viewing angle could give it a more dynamic look.


#8

first sketch color


#9

LOoks great I love the cleanness of it all. I really would like to see more in the background that suggests a “grand civilization” but the overall feeling of grand you have accomplished :slight_smile: Great work!

Just to add, perhaps the background , which to me looks like enormouse foliage from trees, could have a vast wall of similar buildings/huts with little lights giving them a pressece in the background. :slight_smile: Just an idea.


#10

next sketch color…


#11

id go with the blue, and wow, great composition =D


#12

Hey there, this is turning out nice but I have to agree that there doesnt seem to be much happening… I mean, If I actually saw this in real life I’d shit myself…but as a picture, it’s lacking the ‘Grandness’ aspect. : ) good luck!


#13

Heyy i love this picture!
Maybe you should build a very big ship in the blur background.
It could be great!!


#14

i guess some update is in order :wink:


#15

finish concept


#16

What a beautiful, gorgeous subtle piece.

I love it… feels like a concept painting for a future Aliens film.

Great stuff!


#17

Thanks behind pane answer :slight_smile:


#18

Hi, In your image, have direction well imposing space and the details
of your architecture allures my eyes.


#19

Great mood…I hadn’t noticed your entry! Beautiful work! Just one small suggestion: perhaps you could give the beacons a vertical rectangular light instead of a circular one. Like this you wouldn’t confuse it with stars, and they would immediately stand out as manmade lights.

Keep it up. This is great!


#20

Your concept is one of my favourite, so I REALLY wish you finish it on time (11 days remaining !):bounce:
Probably it would work better if the planet is really huge ( spreading on the whole width of your pict.)
Good luck !